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Old 04-04-2013, 01:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
scleaves
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"Maybe I will write to you a song,
That I can play for you all night long,
Maybe then you could see,
All the things I want for you and me."

Gets repetitive. Mix it up with a one word variation such as for example, "Hey!"
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