Biffy Clyro: Puzzle (lyric, dance, house, indie, pop)

mark1990celtic1888 · 03-02-2008, 12:00 PM

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Originally Posted by ProggyMan

Get over yourself. You have bad grammar, and you don't sound poetic in the least.

i dont write poetry, i write reviews their is a big difference. your so up yourself! yeah i need work on my grammar, big deal. let me see how well you can write a review.

**jackhammer** · 03-02-2008, 12:12 PM

You need to take criticism better.

ProggyMan · 03-03-2008, 04:56 PM

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Originally Posted by mark1990celtic1888

i dont write poetry, i write reviews their is a big difference. your so up yourself! yeah i need work on my grammar, big deal. let me see how well you can write a review.

"are you overlooking my work, because you can't think of terms of such expression?"
Lol.

Rubberchicken · 03-03-2008, 07:50 PM

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Originally Posted by jackhammer

You need to take criticism better.

How about giving some constructive criticism or helpful pointers instead of trying to destroy everything Marks says.
Mark has put more effort and worthwhile input into this thread than you have.
As far as the review goes I've seen worse in magazines and online websites, so for a fellow novice it's not all bad.
Lighten up everyone.

ProggyMan · 03-03-2008, 07:54 PM

We have. He went on a tirade about how we can't comprehend the language he uses.

Rubberchicken · 03-03-2008, 09:08 PM

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Originally Posted by ProggyMan

We have. He went on a tirade about we can't comprehend the language he uses.

And your language/grammar is profoundly better?
Talk about the pot calling the kettle black shheesshh!

ProggyMan · 03-03-2008, 09:09 PM

I forgot one word...And that's not even what he meant by language. See 'melodic exploitation'.

Rubberchicken · 03-03-2008, 10:47 PM

So can you? Comprehend that is.. or are you just too busy nit picking over grammar and such.
Also do you have any reviews on here that I can read out of interest.

mark1990celtic1888 · 03-04-2008, 02:09 AM

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Originally Posted by ProggyMan

I forgot one word...And that's not even what he meant by language. See 'melodic exploitation'.

have you got any freinds, because who the hell would want to hang around with you. You would bring a dictionary to the party and bore everyone. You would tell them how to spell this or that and waste the life and soul of the party. You need to get a life and get out and enjoy what the world offers. Im still going to write and persue my career in journalism, and narrowmindid people like you are not going to stop me!!!

mark1990celtic1888 · 03-04-2008, 02:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Rubberchicken

So can you? Comprehend that is.. or are you just too busy nit picking over grammar and such.
Also do you have any reviews on here that I can read out of interest.

cheers mate for given my review a chance. im the one who seems to get the backlash in this forum. Thanks again.

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03-02-2008, 12:12 PM
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03-03-2008, 09:09 PM
ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 2,461	I forgot one word...And that's not even what he meant by language. See 'melodic exploitation'. __________________ Shut the fuck up and recognize what you holding ain't really broken. -Ian Bavitz If Noah had the benefit of hindsight on his ship he coulda' snatched two unicorns and left behind the mother fuckin' pigs. -Ian Bavitz I <3: Crowquill is cool. Sorta. I hate the Fall Of Troy. And Joy Division. And West Side Story.

03-03-2008, 10:47 PM
Rubberchicken Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 79	So can you? Comprehend that is.. or are you just too busy nit picking over grammar and such. Also do you have any reviews on here that I can read out of interest. __________________ Would you like lies with that?