Remember that everyone has been young at one point. (lyrics, review)

mosesandtherubberducky · 01-17-2006, 06:25 PM

Anyways, two of my friends and I recorded a little bit Sunday and I was hoping for some unbaised criticing of it and suggestions. But before you say that it sucks note that this was a very fast recording and the friend that did editing wasn't putting much effort in it.

Click here for the song, NOW!

**cardboard adolescent** · 01-17-2006, 06:31 PM

Poor guitar.

Maybe if you turned it into an actual song, with some structure, it could have potential.

That would be a positive review, by the way.

mosesandtherubberducky · 01-17-2006, 07:14 PM

So I guess no one is going to say anything besides cardboard. Come on just listen to the "song" (it has no lyrics and is only part) and tell me what you think. Remember we aren't amazing or anything.

**sleepy jack** · 01-17-2006, 07:15 PM

I'll review it before saturday.

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01-17-2006, 06:25 PM
mosesandtherubberducky butt say x Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: so i read the question as "Where YOU live" which was kinda funny instead of "Where you live" Posts: 1,662	Remember that everyone has been young at one point. Anyways, two of my friends and I recorded a little bit Sunday and I was hoping for some unbaised criticing of it and suggestions. But before you say that it sucks note that this was a very fast recording and the friend that did editing wasn't putting much effort in it. Click here for the song, NOW! __________________ Can I have a youtube video for a sig? There's a thing that says "Wrap [youtube] tags around selected text"

01-17-2006, 06:31 PM
cardboard adolescent time isn't on my side Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Chicago Posts: 2,378	Poor guitar. Maybe if you turned it into an actual song, with some structure, it could have potential. That would be a positive review, by the way.

01-17-2006, 07:14 PM
mosesandtherubberducky butt say x Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: so i read the question as "Where YOU live" which was kinda funny instead of "Where you live" Posts: 1,662	So I guess no one is going to say anything besides cardboard. Come on just listen to the "song" (it has no lyrics and is only part) and tell me what you think. Remember we aren't amazing or anything. __________________ Can I have a youtube video for a sig? There's a thing that says "Wrap [youtube] tags around selected text"

01-17-2006, 07:15 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,242	I'll review it before saturday. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.