Crowquill and Strummer521 (indie, tune, cover, myspace, track)

**sleepy jack** · 01-27-2008, 07:03 PM

MySpace.com - Ethan & Ben - Washington And, Massachusetts - Experimental / Indie / Zouk - www.myspace.com/ethansbenl

This is the first thing we've done together, be gentle and post your thoughts and add us and stuff.

Comus · 01-27-2008, 07:09 PM

I like the general gist of what you're getting at and I can see how it can improve, don't like the vocals, because firstly I can't hear em and secondly they seem very out of tune. Boost the vocals up about, add another guitar track and tune it up a little, even echo the original, just to add some depth. The whole thing feels like an interlude to me though.

**jackhammer** · 01-27-2008, 07:09 PM

Ethan <3.

Lizzie · 01-27-2008, 07:18 PM

Yeah, the vocals were a bit strange and much to quite, and it also sounds very empty, but the song could probably be good.
I also went to Ethan Smiths myspace page and I quite loved the song on that one

swim · 01-27-2008, 07:21 PM

Did ben do the productiony things and back up vocals?

**sleepy jack** · 01-27-2008, 07:23 PM

Yeah I just did the base song and he did all the frilly pretty things to make it dope.

pheurton · 01-28-2008, 12:36 PM

your original cover was good enough

**sleepy jack** · 01-28-2008, 07:24 PM

Ben mixed another version of the song, tell me which you guys like better.

**sleepy jack** · 01-30-2008, 09:18 PM

We put up a Smiths cover "Back to the Old House"

CAPTAIN CAVEMAN · 01-30-2008, 10:52 PM

not real zouk

posers

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01-27-2008, 07:03 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,572	Crowquill and Strummer521 MySpace.com - Ethan & Ben - Washington And, Massachusetts - Experimental / Indie / Zouk - www.myspace.com/ethansbenl This is the first thing we've done together, be gentle and post your thoughts and add us and stuff. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

01-27-2008, 07:09 PM
Comus I'm better than you Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 462	I like the general gist of what you're getting at and I can see how it can improve, don't like the vocals, because firstly I can't hear em and secondly they seem very out of tune. Boost the vocals up about, add another guitar track and tune it up a little, even echo the original, just to add some depth. The whole thing feels like an interlude to me though. __________________ You dangling swinging Hanging, spinning, aftermath Your soft white flesh turns past me slaked with blood Your evil eyes more damning than a demon's curse Your lovely body soon caked with mud As I carry you to your grave my arms your hearse You stand before me defenceless Your stare unchanging silent, cold, intense sears my brain

01-27-2008, 07:09 PM
jackhammer Recieved first cool point Join Date: May 2007 Location: U.K Posts: 6,021	Ethan <3. __________________ My music collection.cough cough enjoy. Ha Ha charade you are. My dvd collection.

01-27-2008, 07:18 PM
Lizzie Diskobox Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 675	Yeah, the vocals were a bit strange and much to quite, and it also sounds very empty, but the song could probably be good. I also went to Ethan Smiths myspace page and I quite loved the song on that one __________________ white and black, are you looking for the sun boy? the sun doesn't shine down here, no, not in the shadow

01-27-2008, 07:21 PM
swim I'm still your f4g Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina Posts: 4,525	Did ben do the productiony things and back up vocals? __________________ Whatever it is you think you are, you're not a good friend, unique, well read, good looking or smart. Now you know.

01-27-2008, 07:23 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,572	Yeah I just did the base song and he did all the frilly pretty things to make it dope. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

01-28-2008, 12:36 PM
pheurton n/a Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 948	your original cover was good enough

01-28-2008, 07:24 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,572	Ben mixed another version of the song, tell me which you guys like better. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

01-30-2008, 09:18 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,572	We put up a Smiths cover "Back to the Old House" __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

01-30-2008, 10:52 PM
CAPTAIN CAVEMAN MY STEREO HATES YOU Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,673	not real zouk posers __________________