New orginal song i want yall to hear (lyrics, songs)

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 07:49 AM

I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 07:52 AM

I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?

pheurton · 04-07-2008, 12:20 PM

Reminds me of Phil Collins.

mr dave · 04-07-2008, 01:59 PM

i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary?

you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics.

i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd
i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were
everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out?

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 02:35 PM

At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.

shawn pierce · 04-07-2008, 02:36 PM

oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......

mr dave · 04-07-2008, 02:37 PM

4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her....

**Urban Hatemonger** · 04-07-2008, 02:38 PM

And I thought you said it was NEW

Comus · 04-07-2008, 04:35 PM

False advertising

TheCaster · 04-07-2008, 08:43 PM

welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea
hey, at least its causing a significant effect

the high *ting* the drums are playing is annoying
the guitar is bland and boring
the voice is nails on a chalk board

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04-07-2008, 07:49 AM
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	New orginal song i want yall to hear I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think?? look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry " Last edited by shawn pierce : 04-08-2008 at 08:29 AM.

04-07-2008, 07:52 AM
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?

04-07-2008, 12:20 PM
pheurton n/a Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 933	Reminds me of Phil Collins.

04-07-2008, 01:59 PM
mr dave Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: everywhere Posts: 447	i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary? you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics. i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out? __________________ i am the universe http://www.myspace.com/wallofpanda

04-07-2008, 02:35 PM
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.

04-07-2008, 02:36 PM
shawn pierce Groupie Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 6	oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......

04-07-2008, 02:37 PM
mr dave Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: everywhere Posts: 447	4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her.... __________________ i am the universe http://www.myspace.com/wallofpanda

04-07-2008, 02:38 PM
Urban Hatemonger GET TO FALKIRK Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: STONYBRIDGE Posts: 9,647	And I thought you said it was NEW __________________

04-07-2008, 04:35 PM
Comus I'm better than you Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 462	False advertising __________________ You dangling swinging Hanging, spinning, aftermath Your soft white flesh turns past me slaked with blood Your evil eyes more damning than a demon's curse Your lovely body soon caked with mud As I carry you to your grave my arms your hearse You stand before me defenceless Your stare unchanging silent, cold, intense sears my brain