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Old 10-21-2005, 02:39 PM  
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So Im writing this song and the refrain is a bitch (as always) to come up with. What are your opinions of refrains, or songs without them? Let me hear your thoughts, and if you know any, let me know.
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a song without a refrain is not a song at all....
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a song without a refrain is not a song at all....
that's what I'd say too
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depends on the style really.

A chorus (refrain) is a integral part of pop and pop rock songs but many heavy style of music do not include them at all. Pay attention to the sound you're going for and if it feels right add one. I often will have similar sounding chorus's but change up the wording a bit if it sounds too dull.
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Old 10-21-2005, 04:53 PM  
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Does stairway to heaven have one? im really asking here, im trying to remeber, and what constitues a refrain? Does Bohemian Rhapsody? Iron Man?
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i guess i just like simetry in songs...as in everything in life...i'm strange that way
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Old 10-21-2005, 05:24 PM  
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Songs without refrains seem kind of unfinished to me
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well.. you could have like a riff that repeats every now and then and that could be your chorus... all songs have that. almost all of them, anyway.. the words can change all the time, but there's that sound that keeps repeating
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In stairway the "and it makes me wonder" kind of constitutes a refrain and Rhapsody gets by because right the way through its such an amazing song. But yeah, if you cant think of a refrain then generally your screwed
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and can som1 tell me why my picture never appears after my posts or can i just not see it because its mine????????
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