Seasons (rock, member, songs, guitar, Acoustic guitar)

**sleepy jack** · 11-22-2005, 03:24 PM

Looking into your eyes
So beautifully brown this october
Remember my april that i love you
I told you so Feburary
The snow falls down creating a crown
On your beautiful brown hair
Like the leaves in autumn
I remember when i first touched you
Hotter then a summer in phoenix
Standing on the edge of this cliff
Staring into the water
The ocean slams against the rock
This summers night
I hold you close
and whisper into your beautiful ear
i love you forever and today

Be brutal.
and dont give me "wow thats just sappy" its meant to be.

DontRunMeOver · 11-24-2005, 06:57 AM

Well I think its nice Misfits. Very sweet and if it is sappy then at least people who like sappy songs will like it (nothing wrong with that, it decreases the number of hairy, smelly, angry guys who count themselves as fans - not really a problem).

One 'issue': The bit about 'my april, I told you so february' seems a bit silly.

One 'other comment': The part about whispering in your beautiful ear made me laugh. Does the person have an ugly ear too? One ugly ear, one beautiful ear? Don't get rid of this bit though! Its funny!

riseagainstrocks · 11-24-2005, 08:46 AM

Is the girls name April?

and most women love this kinda thing if you sing it too them over some acoustic guitar. And the sappier the better.

**sleepy jack** · 11-24-2005, 12:38 PM

No its not its just april fit with the i told you so in feburary part...

madeinNY · 11-26-2005, 04:31 PM

That might be bad though, 'cause she'll think you forgot her name.

Sappy song. But we (girls) love the sap. Sap, sap, sap, sap it in.

ahaha.

**sleepy jack** · 11-26-2005, 04:59 PM

She'll understand that it fits better with the theme and probaly notice it when i play it.

and she knows i wouldn't forget her name.

madeinNY · 11-26-2005, 05:31 PM

ok, as long as she knows

EDGE · 12-02-2005, 07:12 PM

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11-22-2005, 03:24 PM
sleepy jack thom yorke disciple Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 18,069	Seasons Looking into your eyes So beautifully brown this october Remember my april that i love you I told you so Feburary The snow falls down creating a crown On your beautiful brown hair Like the leaves in autumn I remember when i first touched you Hotter then a summer in phoenix Standing on the edge of this cliff Staring into the water The ocean slams against the rock This summers night I hold you close and whisper into your beautiful ear i love you forever and today Be brutal. and dont give me "wow thats just sappy" its meant to be. __________________ I sit in my house for days on end and stare at the roses in the closet.

11-24-2005, 06:57 AM
DontRunMeOver They call me Tundra Boy Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: In your linen cupboard. Posts: 1,214	Well I think its nice Misfits. Very sweet and if it is sappy then at least people who like sappy songs will like it (nothing wrong with that, it decreases the number of hairy, smelly, angry guys who count themselves as fans - not really a problem). One 'issue': The bit about 'my april, I told you so february' seems a bit silly. One 'other comment': The part about whispering in your beautiful ear made me laugh. Does the person have an ugly ear too? One ugly ear, one beautiful ear? Don't get rid of this bit though! Its funny!

11-24-2005, 08:46 AM
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: JMU Posts: 3,160	Is the girls name April? and most women love this kinda thing if you sing it too them over some acoustic guitar. And the sappier the better. __________________ www.siegemusic.blogspot.com One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

11-24-2005, 12:38 PM
sleepy jack thom yorke disciple Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 18,069	No its not its just april fit with the i told you so in feburary part... __________________ I sit in my house for days on end and stare at the roses in the closet.

11-26-2005, 04:31 PM
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 461	That might be bad though, 'cause she'll think you forgot her name. Sappy song. But we (girls) love the sap. Sap, sap, sap, sap it in. ahaha. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

11-26-2005, 04:59 PM
sleepy jack thom yorke disciple Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 18,069	She'll understand that it fits better with the theme and probaly notice it when i play it. and she knows i wouldn't forget her name. __________________ I sit in my house for days on end and stare at the roses in the closet.

11-26-2005, 05:31 PM
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 461	ok, as long as she knows __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-02-2005, 07:12 PM
EDGE onnee loooveee Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Leominster, Massachuetts Posts: 1,034	aw __________________ citizen cope She drink a beer with a proper shot She got knocked up in a pickup truck But she got engaged when she was nineteen To this dude who was acting insane Has a .45 that he always cleaned Said one day one day one too many days Now she ducked and she ran away Never to be heard from, never to be seen I check the cover of a magazine I'm just wondering how, just wondering how