tambo

Tried to fit in with this punk girl in my class/
she dies her hair bright pink and could kick my ass/
I'm not afraid to say that I'm a little scared/
But I would do anything to see her in her underwear/


Don't tell me that I'm insignificant/
I still like you even though you are different/
I hate the way that you are teasing me/
If you're gonna say no then just let me be/

I saw her at the cinema/
with that rocker guy/
All my friends laughed at me/
I could of died/
but I plucked up the courage to work on over to her/
tapped the rocker on the shoulder and said/
HEY THAT'S MY GIRL!/

He picked me up and threw me down the aisles/
all of the while my punk girl smiled/
She may be hot but godammit she's mean/
but i don't care about that cos she's got the best ass I have ever seen!

sleepy jack

That was bad.
Just bad.
Plus most likely you'll be hated for it.
Seriously punk has nothing to do with whining about your life.
Blink 182 shit isn't good.

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Fenixpunk

id say its more dead milkman-ish than blink 182. theres a few good lines in it, i dont think you got the timing all the way down though.

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tambo

I think you kind of missed the point of the song there. It was a spoof of punk-the fact that this girl was all punk and trying to be different and the guy was trying to fit in. i just thought it was abit of a fun song. and fenix i realise about the timing. check out the post i made HOW AM I SLIPPING UP? on the song writing forum also to give me a bit of help please.