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Old 03-17-2007, 11:53 PM  
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Old 03-18-2007, 05:21 AM  
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Ryt first of all this forums **** coz ya all up in here hatin en none of ya'll can rap or freestyle well not wat av read anyway. Plus i ask ya to drop a verse en ya say no well i fink tht mean ya couldt fink of anythin to spit hence the bit where i said ya'll can freestyle en theres no point replyin because this is the last tym ill b cumin on this piece of crap..PEACE!
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Old 03-18-2007, 05:29 AM  
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Ryt first of all this forums **** coz ya all up in here hatin en none of ya'll can rap or freestyle well not wat av read anyway. Plus i ask ya to drop a verse en ya say no well i fink tht mean ya couldt fink of anythin to spit hence the bit where i said ya'll can freestyle en theres no point replyin because this is the last tym ill b cumin on this piece of crap..PEACE!
If this forum is **** then get away fast
Coz if you don't i'll ban your ass
Word to yo mutha
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Old 04-08-2007, 07:51 PM  
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yo, what I'm saying is try a little harder,
we can all be a little smarter,
you better stay the f*ck away from me,
I need my space and that's plain to see,
and it's not because I'm some kind of a freak,
I just make it known, and things look bleak,
if you continue to not set boundaries,
my will is steel like it was made in a foundry,
I've always got you little jello pudding pops around me,
you're not in my league, not even the same county,
come stress on me, and it's my mind that I flex,
I don't even have to say a word, and I'll leave you perplexed,
because I can make you shy away by just giving you a look,
the longer you stick around, and I've got you on my hook,
and you'll try to crawl away in some nook,
I'm the master chef, and you're not a cook,
I'm still spurting these rhymes,
while you're out flirting with dimes,
you better report these crimes,
that I blurt in my times,
I squirt like limes,
you're more tort than mimes,
get ready to abort your lines,
they're not iller than mine,
I'm more intricate and complex than cosign,
I'm an aquarius, so what's yo sign?
and don't show me tat's cuz that's a ho sign,
you're all lazier than a f*cking bovine
and get ready like Daft Punk for one more time,
cuz I know you're more defensive than a f*cking porcupine
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Old 04-08-2007, 10:33 PM  
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Hah. Jay7 is retarded.
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Old 04-11-2007, 11:14 PM  
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My style flips like a kayak,
my rhymes are hotter than Salma Hayek,
you don't get your way and sip cognac,
my rhymes kill and thrill like zodiac,
im'a try the rhyme scheme crowquill,
that you mentioned in that other post,
I don't really know if it will work,
but once it gets moving like an automobile,
then I will begin rolling and start to coast,
these others can't battle me, they ain't got the right torque,
to uncork my flow, and knock off my hinges,
they came out swingin' like Mike Tyson,
but I've got stamina like Cassius Clay,
bring out the stretcher, and bust out the syringes,
you come up just short like Kevin Dyson,
I know all your other friends will do whatever you say,
but not me, ya see, I'm from a different school of thought,
yeah, that's right PHP, I'm talking to you,
always poking around, and got nothin' nice to say,
what's funny is I'm that UsedTool you bought,
I'm the one you'll turn to when you're stuck like glue,
because my stocks rising, until it's my Don Maclean day,
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Old 04-12-2007, 09:58 PM  
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The Used Tool Guy thinks he can rhyme, but all i see from him is one f**ked up bi
If you got british rhythm like me, then please come a long and set up your tee
As we gona play a little golf, while my mother is cooking up some illegal remedy.
No not remedy i mean a bit of home made weed, not the bread your mother loves to nead
Yes my mums a drug addict, and your mum loved to suk ma d*ck
Listen up!

Spitting rythmes is how i like it, rythmeing mimeing suddenly decideing
I cant trust no one not even uncle timmy ride it
loading, exploading its stuck in my head
all these enimies i cant control it

peace owt
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Old 04-12-2007, 10:00 PM  
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I'm not English, but I'm guessing you're what they call a "chav".
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Old 04-12-2007, 10:05 PM  
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Hallo Snickers Wei Bist Du
i speak a bit of german and no im not a chav thats an insult to me man! Im fresh boy rapper man

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Old 04-12-2007, 10:57 PM  
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Well you better work on your raps then.
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