Rap Battles (lyric, punk, rap, rapper, quote)

Scotti-John · 04-12-2007, 11:02 PM

yeh i know lol im beginner rapper between, not that good at battles but i thought id have a go. I just got in to rapping a few days a go, do you think i did well for my first battle??

Trauma · 04-13-2007, 11:46 AM

Seeing as how it's online, it didn't really count for a first "battle".
Work on your flow, syllables per line, and rhyme scheme in general.
If you have time to write one out online it might as well be perfect since in real life you aren't granted any time.

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 04-14-2007, 04:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scotti-John

The Used Tool Guy thinks he can rhyme, but all i see from him is one f**ked up bi
If you got british rhythm like me, then please come a long and set up your tee
As we gona play a little golf, while my mother is cooking up some illegal remedy.
No not remedy i mean a bit of home made weed, not the bread your mother loves to nead
Yes my mums a drug addict, and your mum loved to suk ma d*ck
Listen up!

Spitting rythmes is how i like it, rythmeing mimeing suddenly decideing
I cant trust no one not even uncle timmy ride it
loading, exploading its stuck in my head
all these enimies i cant control it

peace owt

LOL, I thought it was funny, not to say it was that great, but I pretty much laughed at every line, whether is was supposed to be funny or not. Keep working at it.

Scotti-John · 04-14-2007, 07:24 PM

Yo

Yes son it was suposed to make u laff, but ur laffin too hard nigga
holy sh*t ur starting to smell like a giraffe.

drt ask man randomness lol

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 04-14-2007, 07:55 PM

let me point out that giraffes are frequently gae,
you make me laugh like a hyena,
before I'm about to make you my prey,
so jump off of my wiener,
because you're going through the grinder,
you won't see me coming,
I'm a snake in the grass like a sidewinder,
and I'm coming up humming,
like a motherf*cking killer bee,
it's the rumble in the jungle,
you're full of sh*t like a distillery,
I've got mad heart and I'm humble,
after I mess around with you, I eat you like a mantis,
chew your head off like a cannibal,
get me more pissed off than the black panthers,
I'll swipe my ferocious paw right at your mandible,
and I always come back like a cat the next day,
plus I've got nine lives,
I get your scent, and I'll keep you like seals at bay,
you don't f*ck with me, I'm dangerous like bee hives,

Scotti-John · 04-14-2007, 08:35 PM

nice man

Trauma · 04-15-2007, 01:34 AM

Please don't say nigger
It's not a very nice word
I'll bounce you around like Tigger
Then flip you the bird
My rhymes are kind of alright
Because I keep them real
I try to stay away from tight
Because my skin colour's not ideal
Don't ever front
I always hit it from the back
In the wake of the bunt
Is what it's like after I've been in the sack
Word
Yo, yo
Word
Yo, yo
Check it.
Yo.

I don't think you're black Scotti, are you?
Don't answer that.

**sleepy jack** · 04-15-2007, 01:45 AM

Colour? stop trying to be british,
Sick fuck...with a family fucking fetish.

Trauma · 04-15-2007, 11:07 AM

Crowquill
Schmoquill

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 04-15-2007, 11:32 AM

I'm good; you're not,
you drink lots of beer,
and like to smoke pot,
I'm collected like Fleer,
don't laugh at this,
I'm ahead of you in my mind,
I'm striking out the next batters,
I believe in myself through my design,
I didn't in the beginning,
too many traces of doubt,
but I decided that winning,
was through letting the fear out,
and sometimes I have to be afraid,
to make it easier down the road,
even if it means I don't get laid,
I just pray for a lighter load,
I couldn't imagine the pressure you're under,
I pray that God makes your heart light,
I liking being alone at night and you wonder,
how, but it's better than being in a bar fight,
but before you heed my proposal,
you have to park your pride off to the side,
and put your ego at disposal,
you might feel it's a deride,
but really it's a free ride,
like when you go and trip acid,
you feel naked inside,
but you come out the other side,
with so much passion

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04-12-2007, 11:02 PM
Scotti-John Groupie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 5	yeh i know lol im beginner rapper between, not that good at battles but i thought id have a go. I just got in to rapping a few days a go, do you think i did well for my first battle??

04-14-2007, 07:24 PM
Scotti-John Groupie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 5	lol Yo Yes son it was suposed to make u laff, but ur laffin too hard nigga holy sh*t ur starting to smell like a giraffe. drt ask man randomness lol

04-14-2007, 07:55 PM
~~TheUsedToolguy~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Joplin, MO Posts: 486	let me point out that giraffes are frequently gae, you make me laugh like a hyena, before I'm about to make you my prey, so jump off of my wiener, because you're going through the grinder, you won't see me coming, I'm a snake in the grass like a sidewinder, and I'm coming up humming, like a motherfcking killer bee, it's the rumble in the jungle, you're full of sht like a distillery, I've got mad heart and I'm humble, after I mess around with you, I eat you like a mantis, chew your head off like a cannibal, get me more pissed off than the black panthers, I'll swipe my ferocious paw right at your mandible, and I always come back like a cat the next day, plus I've got nine lives, I get your scent, and I'll keep you like seals at bay, you don't f*ck with me, I'm dangerous like bee hives,

04-14-2007, 08:35 PM
Scotti-John Groupie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 5	nice man

04-15-2007, 01:45 AM
sleepy jack thom yorke disciple Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 18,069	Colour? stop trying to be british, Sick fuck...with a family fucking fetish. __________________ I sit in my house for days on end and stare at the roses in the closet.

04-15-2007, 11:32 AM
~~TheUsedToolguy~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Joplin, MO Posts: 486	I'm good; you're not, you drink lots of beer, and like to smoke pot, I'm collected like Fleer, don't laugh at this, I'm ahead of you in my mind, I'm striking out the next batters, I believe in myself through my design, I didn't in the beginning, too many traces of doubt, but I decided that winning, was through letting the fear out, and sometimes I have to be afraid, to make it easier down the road, even if it means I don't get laid, I just pray for a lighter load, I couldn't imagine the pressure you're under, I pray that God makes your heart light, I liking being alone at night and you wonder, how, but it's better than being in a bar fight, but before you heed my proposal, you have to park your pride off to the side, and put your ego at disposal, you might feel it's a deride, but really it's a free ride, like when you go and trip acid, you feel naked inside, but you come out the other side, with so much passion