Rap Battles (lyric, punk, rap, rapper, quote)

ProggyMan · 07-04-2008, 03:32 PM

Yep, there's two posts in the last day...

650623 · 07-04-2008, 08:06 PM

those aint raps! where the freestyles at? whos out to network???? yay area style!

ProggyMan · 07-04-2008, 10:47 PM

Just toss out a one-liner, no reason to go overboard. I live in Berkeley, I've been in plenty of Middle School freestyle competitions at school, it just doesn't work on the internet.

TROY148 · 07-25-2008, 04:56 PM

650623 by the time I'm done you wish you hadn't stepped to me/
you say you're stuntin/
sounds like straight frontin/
I'm no pro I make rhymes for nothin'/
But still I drop dimes like 13 on the Phoenix suns/
But still I drop fools like Stoudemire the chosen 1/
gimme 3 more bars and then I'm done
That's all it takes to drop you son
I could rip you all day just for fun
but It's not worth it, I'll just give you how much more?-none

Alfred · 07-25-2008, 05:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TROY148

650623 by the time I'm done you wish you hadn't stepped to me/
you say you're stuntin/
sounds like straight frontin/
I'm no pro I make rhymes for nothin'/
But still I drop dimes like 13 on the Phoenix suns/
But still I drop fools like Stoudemire the chosen 1/
gimme 3 more bars and then I'm done
That's all it takes to drop you son
I could rip you all day just for fun
but It's not worth it, I'll just give you how much more?-none

Ya fool, ya tool, what a shitty rap,
the crack o' my ass could rap better than that,

yeah, it's unoriginal

TROY148 · 07-25-2008, 06:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alfred

Ya fool, ya tool, what a shitty rap,
the crack o' my ass could rap better than that,

yeah, it's unoriginal

you get props for humor

WolfAtTheDoor · 07-27-2008, 06:19 PM

There are far too many grammatical errors,
within each of your rhymes, to give me the tremors.
You can't fight a war of words without a knowledge of language,
but kudos - you can be the filling, in my lyrical sandwich.

Alfred · 07-27-2008, 06:28 PM

You grammatically correct, arrogant prick,
your lyrical sandwich tastes like shit,
Grammar and knowledge won't earn you crap,
Go back to your books, you've got no place in rap

oojay · 07-27-2008, 10:15 PM

Yo it's unbelievable what what some cats'll pass off as raps/
You'll get popped and stomped like bubble wrap/ Straight broke in half/
You can call it a freestyle if that's what makes you feel better now/
Excuses for sh*tty rhymes cuz it's off the head'er? nahhhh/
Better be a go-getter now/ Flow steady now/
Study the skills and flow better now/ Just don't me ask how/
An hour's worth of style in a minute now/ Admit it now/
A mile a minute with styles that's in it to win it/ No limit now/
Yo, you can drop words like grammatically incorrect from your broke-down intellect/
A punctuation Nazi's whats left/ Through all the bullsh*t/ Get stepped/
Like stairs/ I get stared like stars and gazed like I'm famous/
Star-gazed like Uranus?/ Ain't that sh*t heinous?/
I'll straight rhyme the same words like the lamest/
But my swagger f*ckin' overtakes it/
Check, we can do away with the one liners/
Separate you small cats from the big dogs and big timers/
I rhyme tighter/ Choke cats out like cage fighters/
Give you more hits to the head than Zildjian's at John Bonhams/

wolverinewolfweiselpigeon · 07-27-2008, 11:29 PM

Word.
Bird.
Turd.
Assured.

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07-04-2008, 03:32 PM
ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 2,804	Yep, there's two posts in the last day... __________________ Shut the fuck up and recognize what you holding ain't really broken. -Ian Bavitz If Noah had the benefit of hindsight on his ship he coulda' snatched two unicorns and left behind the mother fuckin' pigs. -Ian Bavitz I <3: Crowquill is cool. Sorta. I hate the Fall Of Troy. And Joy Division. And West Side Story.

07-04-2008, 08:06 PM
650623 Groupie Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: GOODYEAR, AZ Posts: 6	those aint raps! where the freestyles at? whos out to network???? yay area style!

07-04-2008, 10:47 PM
ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 2,804	Just toss out a one-liner, no reason to go overboard. I live in Berkeley, I've been in plenty of Middle School freestyle competitions at school, it just doesn't work on the internet. __________________ Shut the fuck up and recognize what you holding ain't really broken. -Ian Bavitz If Noah had the benefit of hindsight on his ship he coulda' snatched two unicorns and left behind the mother fuckin' pigs. -Ian Bavitz I <3: Crowquill is cool. Sorta. I hate the Fall Of Troy. And Joy Division. And West Side Story.

07-25-2008, 04:56 PM
TROY148 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Your mum, where she is- that's where I live Posts: 56	650623 by the time I'm done you wish you hadn't stepped to me/ you say you're stuntin/ sounds like straight frontin/ I'm no pro I make rhymes for nothin'/ But still I drop dimes like 13 on the Phoenix suns/ But still I drop fools like Stoudemire the chosen 1/ gimme 3 more bars and then I'm done That's all it takes to drop you son I could rip you all day just for fun but It's not worth it, I'll just give you how much more?-none

07-27-2008, 06:19 PM
WolfAtTheDoor never, eh? Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 96	There are far too many grammatical errors, within each of your rhymes, to give me the tremors. You can't fight a war of words without a knowledge of language, but kudos - you can be the filling, in my lyrical sandwich.

07-27-2008, 06:28 PM
Alfred Bullsh*t Detected Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 1,003	You grammatically correct, arrogant prick, your lyrical sandwich tastes like shit, Grammar and knowledge won't earn you crap, Go back to your books, you've got no place in rap __________________ I was young too, I felt just like you, hated authority, hated all my bosses, I thought they were full of shit. Look, it's like they say, if you're not a rebel by the age of 20, you got no heart, but if you haven't turned establishment by 30, you've got no brains. Because there are no story-book romances, no fairy-tale endings. So before you run out and change the world, ask yourself, "What do you really want?"