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S.B. · 11-30-2005, 03:13 PM

Everyday it seems people are battered confused/
Stuck in they veiws it's not enough that they lose/
Society rioting hidin the truth of they dues...../
All this commercail sucess niggas get it confused/
Givin away balls & words for a new pair of shoes/
Who cares is it you? can you stare at the truth?/
So many muthafu.kas stay alive just to die..../
Survive just to lie almost die to try and get by/
Sacrificein the the truths for bentlys and coupes/
A house with many rooms and a way bigger roof/
Still remain gettin played media has no shame/
Lost of privicy feedin us through a frame...../
Knockin n*ggas off they axes fu*kin up just to gain/
Brain washed no change cuz they figure they can't/
While conservitives laugh on the way to the bank/
Gettin crumbs off the dollar thinkin you takin the cake/
when you like a girl with R.Kelly on a featuered tape/

TrampInaTux · 11-30-2005, 03:17 PM

SB have a go at battling fenix in my alter-ego tambos thread-Rap Battles

S.B. · 11-30-2005, 03:20 PM

Fa sho

Merkaba · 11-30-2005, 11:19 PM

To be honest not a lot of rap looks good on paper.
You need the beat, and a friggin lucky one at that, to make rap lyrics happen.
I didn't like the above, by the way.

**LesPaul43** · 11-30-2005, 11:22 PM

I guess it might be able to work with a tight beat........your spelling aint great lol

RealXenWarrior · 12-01-2005, 09:11 AM

good rap happens... it looks like you spen too much time on this. Also the thing is... its very one way street-ish... you have to conme up with new and inivative ways to convey meaning.... straight rhymes aren't going to do it. the lyrics are liner....

.................A
.................B
.................A
.................B

the thing about good rap is that it flows and words are mixed up turned around and back, stutter stepped... its cool and artistic and almost anti poetic. thats what im not seeing in your rap...

im seeing roses are red
violets are blue.
and so on.
change it up but i LOVE the theme.... most rap is about bitches and hoes and 9's on yo waist. i love seeing meaningful lyrics... especially with the kind of hold rap has on the youth at this point.

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 12-01-2005, 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RealXenWarrior

most rap is about bitches and hoes and 9's on yo waist.

False.

RealXenWarrior · 12-02-2005, 08:38 AM

most popular rap? yes.
thats what sells... i take it you know about music... you know thats what sells.... the gangster lifestyle... you have to be kidding the MOST popular rap isnt about the falsified played out gangsta motif... underground rap... is beautiful.... heiruspecs... jedi mind tricks... **** like that.... i like alot... ****in citizen cope... good **** man.... BUT popular rap im afraid is dominated by the 50 cent's and the ****in east side boys of our time.

madeinNY · 12-03-2005, 07:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RealXenWarrior

most popular rap? yes.
thats what sells... i take it you know about music... you know thats what sells.... the gangster lifestyle... you have to be kidding the MOST popular rap isnt about the falsified played out gangsta motif... underground rap... is beautiful.... heiruspecs... jedi mind tricks... **** like that.... i like alot... ****in citizen cope... good **** man.... BUT popular rap im afraid is dominated by the 50 cent's and the ****in east side boys of our time.

Eminem doesn't do gangster rap, and he's one of the most famous rappers. He talks about his hardtimes with his wife and daughter, hell, one of his songs made me cry. I don't think all popular rap is gangster rap.

tambo · 12-05-2005, 02:46 PM

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Originally Posted by madeinNY

Eminem doesn't do gangster rap, and he's one of the most famous rappers. He talks about his hardtimes with his wife and daughter, hell, one of his songs made me cry. I don't think all popular rap is gangster rap.

sorry, a bit off subject but an EMINEM SONG MADE YOU CRY? which one was it?

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11-30-2005, 03:13 PM
S.B. Groupie Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Inkster,Mi Posts: 22	Closed subjet. Everyday it seems people are battered confused/ Stuck in they veiws it's not enough that they lose/ Society rioting hidin the truth of they dues...../ All this commercail sucess niggas get it confused/ Givin away balls & words for a new pair of shoes/ Who cares is it you? can you stare at the truth?/ So many muthafu.kas stay alive just to die..../ Survive just to lie almost die to try and get by/ Sacrificein the the truths for bentlys and coupes/ A house with many rooms and a way bigger roof/ Still remain gettin played media has no shame/ Lost of privicy feedin us through a frame...../ Knockin nggas off they axes fukin up just to gain/ Brain washed no change cuz they figure they can't/ While conservitives laugh on the way to the bank/ Gettin crumbs off the dollar thinkin you takin the cake/ when you like a girl with R.Kelly on a featuered tape/ __________________ If you feel me you feel me if you don't then don't!!

11-30-2005, 03:17 PM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	SB have a go at battling fenix in my alter-ego tambos thread-Rap Battles

11-30-2005, 03:20 PM
S.B. Groupie Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Inkster,Mi Posts: 22	Fa sho __________________ If you feel me you feel me if you don't then don't!!

11-30-2005, 11:19 PM
Merkaba Whitewater! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 2,823	To be honest not a lot of rap looks good on paper. You need the beat, and a friggin lucky one at that, to make rap lyrics happen. I didn't like the above, by the way. __________________ Right you lot, shut it. Strewth Fowler my son, all looks a bit pear-shaped round here or what. The govenor's talking, Saturday's game, very dodgy, very naughty, could go a little pear-shaped. If there's a rough things might be well iffy. These faces are a little bit hard, know what I mean, a little bit of oof, have some of that my son, bosh, sorted, ta ta, got me, so be clever. Good, now shut it!

11-30-2005, 11:22 PM
LesPaul43 Bring da Ruckus Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,115	I guess it might be able to work with a tight beat........your spelling aint great lol

12-01-2005, 09:11 AM
RealXenWarrior Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: C-Berry 407! Posts: 52	good rap happens... it looks like you spen too much time on this. Also the thing is... its very one way street-ish... you have to conme up with new and inivative ways to convey meaning.... straight rhymes aren't going to do it. the lyrics are liner.... .................A .................B .................A .................B the thing about good rap is that it flows and words are mixed up turned around and back, stutter stepped... its cool and artistic and almost anti poetic. thats what im not seeing in your rap... im seeing roses are red violets are blue. and so on. change it up but i LOVE the theme.... most rap is about bitches and hoes and 9's on yo waist. i love seeing meaningful lyrics... especially with the kind of hold rap has on the youth at this point. __________________ Never shall innocent blood be shed. Yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river. The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful striking hammer of God. In nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti.

12-02-2005, 08:38 AM
RealXenWarrior Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: C-Berry 407! Posts: 52	most popular rap? yes. thats what sells... i take it you know about music... you know thats what sells.... the gangster lifestyle... you have to be kidding the MOST popular rap isnt about the falsified played out gangsta motif... underground rap... is beautiful.... heiruspecs... jedi mind tricks... ** like that.... i like alot... in citizen cope... good man.... BUT popular rap im afraid is dominated by the 50 cent's and the **in east side boys of our time. __________________ Never shall innocent blood be shed. Yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river. The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful striking hammer of God. In nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti.