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Old 12-22-2005, 07:31 PM  
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe
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Default To Take New York In One Shot

existence is another word
that means nothing to me anymore
my heart is on strings and wires
on display for the entire world
surrounded by the sound of
our voices
I hope your alone tonight
and like a match
struck to burn
myself alive
my voice screams your name
on this side of individuality
I look just like you
here in this tidal wave
we all know how you are
my time was well spent
and how heartfelt we were
in those black skies
but to me your still blue
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Old 12-22-2005, 07:33 PM  
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I like it.
It reminds me of converge.
Which is a good thing.
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Old 12-22-2005, 07:35 PM  
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I like converge
and you now.
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