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12-24-2005, 01:44 AM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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Who am i to play god?
You took what was mine
Stole the innocence out of childs eye You maybe a monster But your still human and a sick and twisted one at that Go to hell i thought i couldn't hate someone so much But you treated me like i was a doll This is where you brought a whore into the chapel and poisoned and stole the girls virginty and the bomb dropped and destroyed a country and man was so bored he jumped and mother didn't want the baby Words of lies and folly Death and ruin our only sanctum See my side of the story old man You were the foolish one, call me young and dumb You ruined the utopia Turned heaven into hell Yeah, i could pull this trigger and lifetime will end To think in one second 46 years could come crashing down It can all end tonight in a short moment Death is the equalizer Rich,Poor,Good,Bad Old,Young,Ugly,Beautiful It'll take you regardless So rip off my mask and look into your killers eyes I look at your crying begging to live and i wonder Who the hell am i to play god? the rhyming SUCKS i know its non existant actually..
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12-24-2005, 05:30 AM
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that's my war face.
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Well it certainly gets the point across easily. Like you said though the rhyming sucks. Change it to a poem and you could get away with it. Have you got a backing developed for it, or is it just the words you have made so far?
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12-24-2005, 12:40 PM
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Bone Machine
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Already have the backing.
Its metalcore its not like anyones gonna get pissy if it lacks rhyming.
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12-24-2005, 02:18 PM
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that's my war face.
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well no... just shout it no-one will notice
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12-28-2005, 05:27 AM
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that's my war face.
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