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Old 12-27-2005, 05:40 PM  
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yeah we getcha. crucify is a common word. i never even made a jesus connection.
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Old 12-27-2005, 11:50 PM  
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Well i liked it a lot...except the part about the hacking away at the veins
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Old 12-27-2005, 11:53 PM  
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I know its cliched but i'd rather have a cliched line that flows with the song then one that doesn't to be honest.
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Old 12-27-2005, 11:54 PM  
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I guess....but other than that it sounds pretty good
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