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Old 12-26-2005, 07:42 PM  
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Staring into those frozen ocean eyes
I see despair and loss
How is it with one gaze the sky fell apart?
You crucified humanity on a cross
With one word you've broken a million hearts
You've fed your people nothing but lies
They follow your false art
Now everythings dead not even a fly remains
Your sick, your insides wish to depart?
You take a sword and hack away at your veins
Just wishing you could restart
You hang our neck my chains
This isn't how imagine it?
All these pains?
I know its so hard to admit
It rains and rains and rains
But you've destroyed the world now you feel like shit
Lightning bolt, now you've gone lame
You decided to quit
You take a gun to your head to end this game
How funny it is, modern man corporate giant
The future of this world turned out to be a murderous tyrant?
We choked on the carbon monoxied
Modern day man, corporate giant
Stare into the mirror at your blue eyes
Those are the eyes of the man who damned humanity
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Old 12-26-2005, 08:31 PM  
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Thats a ****ing hot song there Misfits.
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Old 12-26-2005, 08:58 PM  
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Dude, you just got baptised.

anyway, the song uses some cliches, but for the most part is good.

the last 4 lines are good. but the beginning sounds like an anti-Jesus rant.
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Old 12-26-2005, 09:11 PM  
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I didn't mean it to be anti-christian im studying roman history and found crucifying to be a nice metaphor for torturing/killing someone/thing.
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Old 12-27-2005, 01:43 AM  
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i like it. like RAR said....a few lines are kinda cliche, but overall, good work. i wanna hear it recorded.
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i would like to eat at this particular restaurant.
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I see you've been reading a Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy book... anyways the song is good-but I agree with RAR, it does go into a bit of an anti-christian rant. You Judas!
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Old 12-27-2005, 05:03 AM  
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i was in the musical godspell. unfourtantely i didnt get to play judas. or jesus. the bit with the sword is good. they also plunged swords into there stomachs. good way to die . as if youd use asps to kill yourself. stupid cleopatra.
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i think im not really seeing the anti christian rant........because im atheist....and stuff like that doesnt seem to stand out to me...meh....
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Old 12-27-2005, 03:00 PM  
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Its not anti christian crucifying someone is a roman way of killing someone in a painful way i was using it as a metaphor not a screw jesus line.
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