"I Wonder" (Next Year) (dance, house, rock, favorite song)

EDGE · 01-09-2006, 05:42 PM

I loooovveee this. The chorus is sooooo good.

*kudos

wordiva · 06-10-2006, 12:52 PM

I am of two minds, i found the first verse goes off on a 'rhythm'that has a different feel than the rest of the song, in turn that for me is slightly confusing as the whole 'flow' of the song changes too much the verses are very long and the chorus very small again this could become 'drawn out' for the listener.

My other 'personality' sees it as a very moving and for most part extreemly well written, and and as odd as it is i could feel the song dripping with the intensity and emotion of the writer. It is amazing and the execution of the lines themselves are brilliant.

Crowe · 06-10-2006, 05:28 PM

Hey thanks

I think I wrote this on here way back in January - interesting to see it come up again, and a pleasant surprise. Sometimes I forget somethings that I've written... glad half of you liked it - and I hope the other half of you can forgive my verbose verses.

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01-09-2006, 05:42 PM
EDGE onnee loooveee Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Leominster, Massachuetts Posts: 1,032	I loooovveee this. The chorus is sooooo good. kudos __________________ citizen cope* She drink a beer with a proper shot She got knocked up in a pickup truck But she got engaged when she was nineteen To this dude who was acting insane Has a .45 that he always cleaned Said one day one day one too many days Now she ducked and she ran away Never to be heard from, never to be seen I check the cover of a magazine I'm just wondering how, just wondering how

06-10-2006, 12:52 PM
wordiva Groupie Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 5	I am of two minds, i found the first verse goes off on a 'rhythm'that has a different feel than the rest of the song, in turn that for me is slightly confusing as the whole 'flow' of the song changes too much the verses are very long and the chorus very small again this could become 'drawn out' for the listener. My other 'personality' sees it as a very moving and for most part extreemly well written, and and as odd as it is i could feel the song dripping with the intensity and emotion of the writer. It is amazing and the execution of the lines themselves are brilliant.

06-10-2006, 05:28 PM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 726	Hey thanks I think I wrote this on here way back in January - interesting to see it come up again, and a pleasant surprise. Sometimes I forget somethings that I've written... glad half of you liked it - and I hope the other half of you can forgive my verbose verses. __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic