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01-14-2006, 01:54 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2005
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Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral(rough draft)
Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral
Our velvet skin tears so easily in these ultraviolet windshield wipers I want you to read this a million times the ballad of a boy noone cared about between sunsets I invent new ways for things to break the things we believe in are only distortions of our fragile reality Science fails us once again take another sip of your cyanide martini drive ten miles faster for me maybe we can crash this car before sundown call the surgeon we need an operation
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01-14-2006, 01:55 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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Very good for the rought draft, i like the ending quite a bit.
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01-14-2006, 09:04 PM
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Don't think twice
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: A basement on the hill
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i think i've heard a few of those lines used before in other songs.
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Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation |
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01-15-2006, 10:34 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Dec 2005
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no you haven't
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01-15-2006, 10:47 AM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Yeah it's good. I like it a lot, and like misfits I also think the ending is cool. Is this the old TheNumber12LooksLikeMe, or a new one?
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01-15-2006, 11:18 AM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
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Quote:
 how you gonna tell him he hasnt
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Gotta Problem Wit Me...SOLVE IT..Think Im Trippin...TIE MA SHOE..Cant Face Me..THEN TURN DA FUCK AROUND Though our hands are chained like they are They haven't taken music from us yet So that's how we'll fight We'll never apologize for saying what we feel
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01-15-2006, 05:22 PM
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you are freakin out, man
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: ajax, ontario
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it looks familiar... and thats not good
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01-15-2006, 05:31 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
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It's miserable...I like it.
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Choose Liverpool. Choose the dole queue. Choose to scam disability benefit. Choose mind-numbing, grinding efficiency over flair. Choose Torben Piechnik, Istvan Kozma and Paul Stewart. Choose not to win a single league title since the backpass rule was implemented. Choose penalties. Choose car stereos, hubcaps and stanley knives. Choose to trade on your proud sense of tradition and then not lift a finger in protest when two American billionaires who don't even know the name of your club decide to buy it. Choose to win the European Cup whilst only having to play seven matches. Choose to bask in a perpetual, sickening, media love-in. Choose celebrities who **** off out of your city as soon as they have earned the money to do so and then spend the rest of their lives harping on about how wonderful it is. Choose to sing about Munich until confronted with your own tragedy. Choose to end it all in an orgy of self pity, just another excuse to perpetuate the grief culture spawned by your selfish, insular ****ed-up excuse for a city. Choose your future. Choose Scouse. |
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01-15-2006, 06:02 PM
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you are freakin out, man
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: ajax, ontario
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of course you have dumbass... HOLY SHIT WINDSHIELD WIPERS... WHO THE HELL CAME UP WITH THAT??!!?!?!!!111 its about the final product idiot
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01-15-2006, 06:48 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Dec 2005
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I mean sure some of those words youve obviously heard
but my lines are original and yes it is me hobojesus
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