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01-22-2006, 03:04 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,242
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Im just a small town lad
this song is influenced by the lyrics in my sig, i'd appreciate help on it
I surrounded myself with melodies Of songs never heard and harmonys of lives unlead and bodys unbled I hopped a train up to seattle Lived amongst the homeless Spent nights playing for crowds of kids i do not know Im just a small town lad All i have is the clothes on my back My bed is made of the finest cement A roof of cardboard over my head All my beliefs of fame in ruins In all honesty i've forget what im doing So caught up in this life style Im scared of the kids who seem to Know every word i speak, they chant it back to me Im just a small town lad the expectations of the kids is high they all burst into screams as i walk by all the words they repeat are lies they make love to themselves their narcissist ideals they believe the hypocrisy amazes me my tongue inside my cheek my messages have become so bleek yet they they still scream on not noticing the passion is gone the harmonies are dead the melody carries on though the sing song is done the melody carries on I came into this town with a navie dream that everyone loved the sound image meant nothing in there eyes the world was honest, and was built on love the mist has been removed this is a world of half truths and christian hypocrisy its not about music, its about the beauty of the poet and the style of the fiddler as i put away this notebook i call it quits, the kids cry they've lost their favorite trend so keep in mind this is my last public speech private and quiet will be the life i lead I dont want to give you a song to ruin these beliefs i have are nothing more then childs play sexual hierarchy on disney will be fine by me you repeat the hope of a small town lad I’m amazed, no seriously, folks, I’m really fucking awestruck
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01-22-2006, 05:52 PM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
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Damn, i like it. I like what you're saying & how you wrote it.
But shouldnt... Quote:
And this... Quote:
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Gotta Problem Wit Me...SOLVE IT..Think Im Trippin...TIE MA SHOE..Cant Face Me..THEN TURN DA FUCK AROUND Though our hands are chained like they are They haven't taken music from us yet So that's how we'll fight We'll never apologize for saying what we feel
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01-22-2006, 05:54 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,242
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fix'd.
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01-22-2006, 05:57 PM
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a l'amou fou pou tout
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: NY
Posts: 378
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magnifique
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Gotta Problem Wit Me...SOLVE IT..Think Im Trippin...TIE MA SHOE..Cant Face Me..THEN TURN DA FUCK AROUND Though our hands are chained like they are They haven't taken music from us yet So that's how we'll fight We'll never apologize for saying what we feel
Thats like apologizing just for being real |
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01-25-2006, 08:41 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Canada
Posts: 21
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i liked it alot, this is my favorite part
the expectations of the kids is high they all burst into screams as i walk by all the words they repeat are lies they make love to themselves their narcissist ideals they believe the hypocrisy amazes me |
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