*insert girls name here* (quote, song, Hang)

**sleepy jack** · 02-04-2006, 12:01 AM

In an empty alleyway on 3rd street
Looking upon your eyes as rain
Trickles down your face like
Dew on the morning grass
Like water rolling down a hill
It was so awkard and cold
I could see my breath and
and as I put my forehead
Against yours and you smiled
Pretty and white, a laugh that could kill
Our lips touched, my skin was slightly dried
and I died at the thought of you noticing

Lying in cornwall park on a summers day
The grass so green and us laying together
We talked about how much fun we'd have
One day, we'd set off on our boat
and cast aside all the rules from this place
We'd get married and live happily ever after
Then I got up, and you did too
I tackled and you and we rolled around
Wrapped in eachothers embrace
I don't think i've ever been this happy

**LesPaul43** · 02-04-2006, 12:15 AM

Tis pretty dope

DontRunMeOver · 02-04-2006, 04:42 AM

That's just right. Its really good.

half_baked87 · 02-04-2006, 01:01 PM

my teeth hurt...

Crowe · 02-04-2006, 01:18 PM

Quote:

In an empty alleyway on 3rd street
Looking upon your eyes as rain
Trickles down your face like water

This is silly. Rain is water! :P

**sleepy jack** · 02-04-2006, 01:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowe

This is silly. Rain is water! :P

Hahahha.
Wow i just realized that.
I'll think of a replacement line and edit up in a moment.

TrampInaTux · 02-05-2006, 05:02 AM

And also can you actually take off in a boat? Isn't that what you do in a plane? I think that line should be changed to 'set off' or 'head off'. It is a good song, although I think the first verse totally kicks the seconds verse's ass.

**sleepy jack** · 02-05-2006, 05:05 AM

Changed to set off, thanks loads guys...I mean if I had given her this..damn it would have been embarassing with all those mistakes..

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02-04-2006, 12:01 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,559	*insert girls name here* In an empty alleyway on 3rd street Looking upon your eyes as rain Trickles down your face like Dew on the morning grass Like water rolling down a hill It was so awkard and cold I could see my breath and and as I put my forehead Against yours and you smiled Pretty and white, a laugh that could kill Our lips touched, my skin was slightly dried and I died at the thought of you noticing Lying in cornwall park on a summers day The grass so green and us laying together We talked about how much fun we'd have One day, we'd set off on our boat and cast aside all the rules from this place We'd get married and live happily ever after Then I got up, and you did too I tackled and you and we rolled around Wrapped in eachothers embrace I don't think i've ever been this happy __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

02-04-2006, 12:15 AM
LesPaul43 Bring da Ruckus Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,013	Tis pretty dope __________________ Life's not a bitch life is a beautiful woman You only call her a bitch because she won't let you get that pussy Maybe she didn't feel y'all shared any similar interests When Life Gives You Lemons, You Paint That Shit Gold

02-04-2006, 04:42 AM
DontRunMeOver They call me Tundra Boy Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: In your linen cupboard. Posts: 1,208	That's just right. Its really good.

02-04-2006, 01:01 PM
half_baked87 sammichestime Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 363	my teeth hurt... __________________ Its not just dancing "bro" and you're not just "going off" because you're "stoked" on some "sick" band with "crucial" breakdowns. You're not "accidentally" hitting people. But even if you are, thats like putting perfume on a pile of sh1t and calling it a fuking rose. I've had enough excuses. I won't eat sh1t anymore. THIS ENDS NOW!

02-05-2006, 05:02 AM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	And also can you actually take off in a boat? Isn't that what you do in a plane? I think that line should be changed to 'set off' or 'head off'. It is a good song, although I think the first verse totally kicks the seconds verse's ass.

02-05-2006, 05:05 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,559	Changed to set off, thanks loads guys...I mean if I had given her this..damn it would have been embarassing with all those mistakes.. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.