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02-15-2006, 03:46 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 135
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Confession
Confession
My friend called today He said 'way too long' Since I talked to you What did I do wrong? Truth is I'm afraid Of all that he might say And all the wrong I've done Taking every day. Let me down Didn't care I'm hung out to dry My confession. (And now you're here I abandon fear All I need is someone to hear My confession) I confess to the rest My short failings And long winded mauling of truth And attempts to deceive you How can I plead And make you believe That the penance received Could cancel the deed And cast all my sins away, Need some forgiveness |
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02-16-2006, 02:39 AM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,451
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Absolute rubbish
Woefully Crap Fukking Disgraceful U are sh*t Let this be a lesson be learnt-GIVE UP. |
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02-16-2006, 04:17 PM
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Here's lookin at you, kid
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: The White Hotel
Posts: 359
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When you were new you writ no better, and I was never mean to you about it, hobo, so pay it forward man
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The song has potential...try to make some metaphors though, ok? And what's with the "my friend.." songs? |
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02-17-2006, 04:00 AM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,451
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True, very true, but now that I'm not new I have the right.
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02-17-2006, 05:31 AM
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Here's lookin at you, kid
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: The White Hotel
Posts: 359
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lesigh I suppose.
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