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Crazy Luv · 03-10-2006, 09:11 PM

that sounds good to me

you might want to start editing, instead of posting two times in a row

Merkaba · 03-11-2006, 03:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Jadix

Ya I'm really not getting my idea across clearly. I wanted this to have a much more constructive and good feeling. Let me try to explain my thinking on the last verse so you guys can help make it clearer.

Then one day I realized there's
Nothing I can change

I meant theres nothing about the past you can change. The point I want to make is that you have to move on, and MAKE a change happen instead of just waiting for it.

Oh okay, see I thought "Nothing I can change" was refering to the next bit in the piece. So "nothing I can change if all I do is hide then". Thats where my thinkning was. It changes perspective when you say it like that insteado f what i was thinking.

~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ · 03-11-2006, 04:00 PM

I like it.
I give props to anyone who can write a song and then post it on mb for all to compliment or criticize.

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03-10-2006, 09:11 PM
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 376	that sounds good to me you might want to start editing, instead of posting two times in a row __________________ Gotta Problem Wit Me...SOLVE IT..Think Im Trippin...TIE MA SHOE..Cant Face Me..THEN TURN DA FUCK AROUND Though our hands are chained like they are They haven't taken music from us yet So that's how we'll fight We'll never apologize for saying what we feel Thats like apologizing just for being real

03-11-2006, 04:00 PM
~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: In the sea... Posts: 254	I like it. I give props to anyone who can write a song and then post it on mb for all to compliment or criticize.