I'm thinking about it

TrampInaTux · 04-11-2006, 05:40 AM

I'm thinking bout going home
Maybe you would like to join me
A girl like you shouldn't be alone
A guy like me should get in for free
What's your price, love? Really that much?
Sorry darling I ain't got enough
Maybe we should watch TV instead
Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

I'm thinking bout undressing
I'll pull down your skirt love no messing
Bad girls like you should be taught a lesson
My wife will be home soon so no carressing
What, you don't want to? You don't have a choice
I'll only be 2 minutes just keep down your voice
Then you can go home and you won't say a word
Cos slappers like you, no, they don't get heard

Only 2 verses so far then, but what do you all think at the moment? Any ideas for a third verse?

angel18 · 04-11-2006, 11:03 AM

i like it. flow is nice! i haven't any ideas at the moment to help!

Crazy Luv · 04-12-2006, 03:16 AM

i like this one too. hmph, doing a good job. but i dont like these lines in the 1st stanza...
Maybe we should watch TV instead
Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom

TrampInaTux · 04-12-2006, 03:33 AM

The 'room' in the bedroom line is supposed to be echoed out. It works, trust me.

Crazy Luv · 04-12-2006, 03:40 AM

...riiiiiiiiight. well for now, unless i hear it myself, i still stick with my opinion.

well off to ****ing school, oh the joy...

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04-11-2006, 05:40 AM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	I'm thinking about it I'm thinking bout going home Maybe you would like to join me A girl like you shouldn't be alone A guy like me should get in for free What's your price, love? Really that much? Sorry darling I ain't got enough Maybe we should watch TV instead Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom I'm thinking bout undressing I'll pull down your skirt love no messing Bad girls like you should be taught a lesson My wife will be home soon so no carressing What, you don't want to? You don't have a choice I'll only be 2 minutes just keep down your voice Then you can go home and you won't say a word Cos slappers like you, no, they don't get heard Only 2 verses so far then, but what do you all think at the moment? Any ideas for a third verse?

04-11-2006, 11:03 AM
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 135	i like it. flow is nice! i haven't any ideas at the moment to help!

04-12-2006, 03:16 AM
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 376	i like this one too. hmph, doing a good job. but i dont like these lines in the 1st stanza... Maybe we should watch TV instead Don't worry there's a TV in my bedroom __________________ Gotta Problem Wit Me...SOLVE IT..Think Im Trippin...TIE MA SHOE..Cant Face Me..THEN TURN DA FUCK AROUND Though our hands are chained like they are They haven't taken music from us yet So that's how we'll fight We'll never apologize for saying what we feel Thats like apologizing just for being real

04-12-2006, 03:33 AM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	The 'room' in the bedroom line is supposed to be echoed out. It works, trust me.

04-12-2006, 03:40 AM
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 376	...riiiiiiiiight. well for now, unless i hear it myself, i still stick with my opinion. well off to **ing school, oh the joy... __________________ Gotta Problem Wit Me...SOLVE IT..Think Im Trippin...TIE MA SHOE..Cant Face Me..THEN TURN DA FUCK AROUND Though our hands are chained like they are They haven't taken music from us yet So that's how we'll fight** We'll never apologize for saying what we feel Thats like apologizing just for being real