sleepy jack

I really really like this girl, and i've written one poem for her. Which i'll post and I typically use writing to get out certain feelings and I really want to put this on paper. But it is kind of difficult and I have a bunch of verses/lines and they don't seem to fit with eachother, but i'd like opinions on them anyway. They're short.

k, heres the first one I wrote about her.

Your breath seizes my heart strings
How the stars seem to shine tonight
As bright as your eyes…
I’d plunge my heart into their fire
And create a shooting star for you and I
It would be something to do for to see
Your smile light up my life and wash away
The darkness and my days would shine
As white as your wings...
You’re my December and my January
My beginning and my end…
My October, I love you for I told you so in April
And as the stars start to die, you need not worry
For my love for you goes on forever



Heres all the random ones i've writted down about her.


The intricacies if you amaze me
You are my savior, my angel
My heart felt empty, and you helped me
Fill it with thoughts of better things
Memories of you and I cauterize all sorrow
and I kept my mind locked on you

Am I a poet or a lover?
I do not know, but when
I close my eye and recite
These words, I think of once face
and The sun shining through your hair
Close my eyes and hold my hand

Ascension to happiness I give away
My sorrow to people too bitter to love

Summer ambience lying in the grass
Her chest against mine, lips on lips
and the birth of a man has begun

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