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04-29-2006, 05:49 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,561
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Ill See You This Summer
She held my hand and kissed my lips
And said "ill see you this summer.." Oh how lovers tend to die How the raindrops captured the moon & shined like the stars in the sky yet They failed in comparison To the tears flowing from your Bright eyes and I held you Close to keep away the cold I said "you'll see me this summer..." I miss you so, and its been a summer But still you havn't come around Have you forgotten the nights we shared? How we held eachother when we were scared? I can still recall her lips brushing mine as She said "ill see you this summer..."
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04-30-2006, 03:05 AM
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 1,451
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Hmm.... I don't know what to think of this one. The flow isn't as good as some of your other work, and the lyrics are a bit below your usual standards. I like the line 'oh how lovers tend to die'. That jumped out at me for some reason.
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05-01-2006, 09:56 AM
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Groupie
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 15
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Nice I Think Thats Very Catchy
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