sleepy jack

All of us have scars hidden in our eyes
& broken hearts and memories we hide
So lets leave this town and run like kids
We can change our names
I can grow my hair out
Become poets or something
Who really knows?

Baby, im a hypocrite and a fucking liar
Im sick of dying and even more sick of crying
So lets get a drink and toast to drunken fights
and late nights, cause im sick of this life
I think its about time we leave this place, alright?

Driving through foreign streets
Looking at the anorexic snowforts
Where little kids would laugh
And throw snow at eachother
Waging war, funny how things
Never seem to change as we grown old right?

Baby, im a hypocrite and a fucking liar
Im sick of dying and even more sick of crying
So lets get a drink and toast to drunken fights
and late nights, cause im sick of this life
I think its about time we leave this place, alright?

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awriterslastresort

That is a cool song. Way To GO

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shield yourself fool

...of Epic Questions

Yeah nice effort but we need some melodies to actually understand how it goes though obviously. :P But it sounds very emo-ish, if that's an adjective.

angel18

i like this. these two lines are my favourite

"So lets get a drink and toast to drunken fights
and late nights, cause im sick of this life"

Crazy Luv

I like this one, but the second verse needs some work, the flow is rigid at that part to me.

Plus, in the last line of the 1st verse(who really knows?), would putting cares in place of knows, make it flow better?

Favorite parts are

i have a beat for this song. i know its not the beat to-be for this song though, because of the type of music you're going for, what a shame.

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