Click HERE for naked pictures of Angelina Jolie (track, quote)

TrampInaTux · 05-05-2006, 02:00 PM

Something about the way you smile
makes me want to keep you laughing all the while
grab your attention for just a moment
things have died down I gotta keep the ball rolling
Something about the way our eyes meet
look away in shyness but I find it sweet
I wish you knew without me having to tell you (oh no no)
painted pictures in my mind of how we'll see this through
Something about you I cannot put my finger on it
Something about you whatever it is I will not doubt it
Something about you I like not knowing what it is
Something about you I guess it's cos I know you're his...

Really short I know, but I will develop on this later depending on how the verdict is. So then, please PLEASE PLEASE make a comment on this one. Me personally-I think it's alright. But then I would say that, I wrote it. So it's up to you lot whether this gets developed upon or not. Sink or swim?

**right-track** · 05-05-2006, 02:27 PM

I should lock this thread for false advertising.

Has possibilities...the something, something, something, something lines could be the chorus. Get rid of the 'it's' at the end though.

blackTshirt · 05-05-2006, 02:28 PM

i'm into sweet things at the moment and i find this sweet so i like it

awriterslastresort · 05-05-2006, 04:15 PM

What exactly is this thread supposed to be about?

**right-track** · 05-05-2006, 04:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by H.I.M

What exactly is this thread supposed to be about?

It's in the song writing forum...hazard a guess!

awriterslastresort · 05-05-2006, 04:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track

It's in the song writing forum...hazard a guess!

Oh....ummm ok I guess...

explosions-in-my-pants · 05-05-2006, 05:59 PM

to see her naked... she should be in porn, cause half of the movies she is in turn into soft porn... i would imagine half the world has seen her naked by now..

Hobo... the song was very sweet for the type of song/poem it is.. I'm not into ryhming but still i thought it was sweet.. good job.. and whats the realy personal story behide it?

~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ · 05-05-2006, 06:00 PM

What a misleading title! :[

All in all good song, I liked it.

TrampInaTux · 05-06-2006, 02:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by explosions-in-my-pants

whats the realy personal story behide it?

There's not a really personal story behind it... it's just a song about the new-relationship vibe you get and everything that comes with it.

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05-05-2006, 02:00 PM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,457	Click HERE for naked pictures of Angelina Jolie Something about the way you smile makes me want to keep you laughing all the while grab your attention for just a moment things have died down I gotta keep the ball rolling Something about the way our eyes meet look away in shyness but I find it sweet I wish you knew without me having to tell you (oh no no) painted pictures in my mind of how we'll see this through Something about you I cannot put my finger on it Something about you whatever it is I will not doubt it Something about you I like not knowing what it is Something about you I guess it's cos I know you're his... Really short I know, but I will develop on this later depending on how the verdict is. So then, please PLEASE PLEASE make a comment on this one. Me personally-I think it's alright. But then I would say that, I wrote it. So it's up to you lot whether this gets developed upon or not. Sink or swim?

05-05-2006, 02:27 PM
right-track Avin' It! Join Date: May 2005 Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA Posts: 5,055	I should lock this thread for false advertising. Has possibilities...the something, something, something, something lines could be the chorus. Get rid of the 'it's' at the end though. __________________ Choose Liverpool. Choose the dole queue. Choose to scam disability benefit. Choose mind-numbing, grinding efficiency over flair. Choose Torben Piechnik, Istvan Kozma and Paul Stewart. Choose not to win a single league title since the backpass rule was implemented. Choose penalties. Choose car stereos, hubcaps and stanley knives. Choose to trade on your proud sense of tradition and then not lift a finger in protest when two American billionaires who don't even know the name of your club decide to buy it. Choose to win the European Cup whilst only having to play seven matches. Choose to bask in a perpetual, sickening, media love-in. Choose celebrities who ** off out of your city as soon as they have earned the money to do so and then spend the rest of their lives harping on about how wonderful it is. Choose to sing about Munich until confronted with your own tragedy. Choose to end it all in an orgy of self pity, just another excuse to perpetuate the grief culture spawned by your selfish, insular **ed-up excuse for a city. Choose your future. Choose Scouse.

05-05-2006, 02:28 PM
blackTshirt The Randomness Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: romania.. shut up Posts: 897	i'm into sweet things at the moment and i find this sweet so i like it __________________ My rims never spin, to the contrary You'll find that they're quite stationary.

05-05-2006, 04:15 PM
awriterslastresort what WHAT? Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 992	What exactly is this thread supposed to be about? __________________ *shield yourself fool*

05-05-2006, 05:59 PM
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 943	Click HERE for naked pictures of Angelina Jolie to see her naked... she should be in porn, cause half of the movies she is in turn into soft porn... i would imagine half the world has seen her naked by now.. Hobo... the song was very sweet for the type of song/poem it is.. I'm not into ryhming but still i thought it was sweet.. good job.. and whats the realy personal story behide it?

05-05-2006, 06:00 PM
~~Rabid Sea Turtles~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: In the sea... Posts: 255	What a misleading title! :[ All in all good song, I liked it.