TheBig3KilledMyRainDog

I wrote this as an inside thing for certain people to read and get but I think I had some nice imagery (in two lines) so I came here to deflate my ego. Flog away gentle viewers.

Cover the Trash with morter, stone and brick.
Intellectual Masks on Commonwealth waste.
Cheap contractors and poor ventalation
Inundate my lungs with Methane.
I shave tainted layers from my right forearm
like a razor on the leather. I scrape at flesh,
for what rests in marrow. The oozing seep from
leaking bags claws my my chest and I claw at the rash.
Even Jesus dreams of the Cuyahoga on a warm
UMass evening.

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“The night falls gracefully for those who have a love to call their own. But alas, for those to whom love has turned a blind eye – love, it falls like a guillotine”

“No more waiting for fate to befall me, no. I have my dreamboat, and together we will find our destiny, choose our ladder to the sky” - Markus Pierson

mosesandtherubberducky

What/who is Cuyahoga and UMass?

Good imagery, made me cringe a little.

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Can I have a youtube video for a sig? There's a thing that says "Wrap [youtube] tags around selected text"

sleepy jack

Its really pretty, I like the vocabulary alot. Is it about cutting? Thats what I kind of got out of it. Its gooood.

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explosions-in-my-pants

thats what i really liked the most about it. Seems as if you have a dark mind, and it steps out into your writings. It hits the right nerves and dragged me in. I really liked it. Good work!

TheBig3KilledMyRainDog

Well the Cuyahoga River was a River in Clevland that caught on fire. In other words, it s****ing dirty.

UMass is my school, stands for University of Massachusetts. There are 4 of them but the one in Boston was made by corrupt politicians and contractors some of which have been sent to jail because of us. We were built on a landfill.

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“The night falls gracefully for those who have a love to call their own. But alas, for those to whom love has turned a blind eye – love, it falls like a guillotine”

“No more waiting for fate to befall me, no. I have my dreamboat, and together we will find our destiny, choose our ladder to the sky” - Markus Pierson

Merkaba

After reading that, the first 4 lines make pretty good reading. I like it. I'm not sure about the next 4 lines though. Is that you trying to say the waste gets at you like an irritating rash?

Either-or it's pretty rich in imagery, again I like it.

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Right you lot, shut it. Strewth Fowler my son, all looks a bit pear-shaped round here or what. The govenor's talking, Saturday's game, very dodgy, very naughty, could go a little pear-shaped. If there's a rough things might be well iffy. These faces are a little bit hard, know what I mean, a little bit of oof, have some of that my son, bosh, sorted, ta ta, got me, so be clever. Good, now shut it!

TheBig3KilledMyRainDog

No this one is directed towards people. I can't wait till that **** storm goes off because I blogged it on my myspace page.

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“The night falls gracefully for those who have a love to call their own. But alas, for those to whom love has turned a blind eye – love, it falls like a guillotine”

“No more waiting for fate to befall me, no. I have my dreamboat, and together we will find our destiny, choose our ladder to the sky” - Markus Pierson

bungalowbill357

Who is the certain group of people you directed this towards?

TheBig3KilledMyRainDog

Some of the people that works at the Lit. Mag with me. Arrogant elitist donkeys.

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“The night falls gracefully for those who have a love to call their own. But alas, for those to whom love has turned a blind eye – love, it falls like a guillotine”

“No more waiting for fate to befall me, no. I have my dreamboat, and together we will find our destiny, choose our ladder to the sky” - Markus Pierson

bungalowbill357

Ah! Are you drunk?