Untitled Punk lyrics (songs, Harp, Hang)

TrampInaTux · 05-27-2006, 02:00 AM

Killing him killing her killing myself
all the woes of the world stacked on my shelf
****ing democracy it spreads its legs
while the men in suits play games with my head

CHORUS
I never wanted more
I could find no less
Writing my name on the blackboard
humming 'This is just a TEST'.

Killing her killing him killing the children
With bright smiles and love that fills them
Play on their heartstrings, play on their heartstrings,
using the sharp edge of your knife

CHORUS
I never wanted more
I could find no less
Writing my name on the blackboard
humming 'this is just a TEST'

I'm pretty sure this is the first Punk song I've wrote. So I kinda do REALLY need your comments here.

**sleepy jack** · 05-27-2006, 02:03 AM

Its really good, like I could seriously picture that being a sick punk song.

TrampInaTux · 05-27-2006, 02:08 AM

Yay. Maybe I should go into a Punk direction? What do you think?

**sleepy jack** · 05-27-2006, 02:09 AM

I don't know, I like this but I like your other stuff as well, like just keep it varied?

TrampInaTux · 05-27-2006, 02:11 AM

Yeah, I'm just trying out everything at the moment. I'm still young so I can afford to spend a lot of time thinking about where I'm going with my music. I think I should write up a few more Punk songs though.

explosions-in-my-pants · 05-27-2006, 02:15 AM

WOW! I really loved it.. LOVED IT!

the opener was great.. I would change nothing about this song.. and i've thought this over.. re-read and what not.. and well its great.. wonderful.

angel18 · 05-27-2006, 10:12 AM

Try and make the 'punk song' longer in my view. It would be interesting to see where you carry this!

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05-27-2006, 02:00 AM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	Untitled Punk lyrics Killing him killing her killing myself all the woes of the world stacked on my shelf ****ing democracy it spreads its legs while the men in suits play games with my head CHORUS I never wanted more I could find no less Writing my name on the blackboard humming 'This is just a TEST'. Killing her killing him killing the children With bright smiles and love that fills them Play on their heartstrings, play on their heartstrings, using the sharp edge of your knife CHORUS I never wanted more I could find no less Writing my name on the blackboard humming 'this is just a TEST' I'm pretty sure this is the first Punk song I've wrote. So I kinda do REALLY need your comments here.

05-27-2006, 02:03 AM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,788	Its really good, like I could seriously picture that being a sick punk song. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

05-27-2006, 02:08 AM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	Yay. Maybe I should go into a Punk direction? What do you think?

05-27-2006, 02:09 AM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,788	I don't know, I like this but I like your other stuff as well, like just keep it varied? __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

05-27-2006, 02:11 AM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	Yeah, I'm just trying out everything at the moment. I'm still young so I can afford to spend a lot of time thinking about where I'm going with my music. I think I should write up a few more Punk songs though.

05-27-2006, 02:15 AM
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 943	WOW! I really loved it.. LOVED IT! the opener was great.. I would change nothing about this song.. and i've thought this over.. re-read and what not.. and well its great.. wonderful.

05-27-2006, 10:12 AM
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 135	Try and make the 'punk song' longer in my view. It would be interesting to see where you carry this!