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Old 02-06-2007, 03:11 AM  
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4.5. the world got to have haterz if it gonna have playerz

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When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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Old 02-06-2007, 10:49 AM  
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Delete These Posts. Anything Without A Number Before It Is Spam.

In Particular, Delete The Latest Posts By Crowe And Right-track. And Delete Some Of Their Other Posts For Good Measure. A Random Selection Will Do.
Urban...mods. Please clean the thread up for the resident poets.

Apologies for spoiling it.
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4.6. Apology accepted.

4.7. Don't call me a poet. Poets wear cravats and sit outside french style cafes, sipping coffee from small cups... wistfully. I'm a rock star.
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Old 02-06-2007, 10:56 AM  
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Rock stars take drugs, write great lyrics, smash up hotel rooms and shag loads of woman...your a Mock Star.
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Old 02-06-2007, 02:23 PM  
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Lmfao. Mock star. good stuff.
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Old 02-07-2007, 05:58 AM  
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Rock stars take drugs, write great lyrics, smash up hotel rooms and shag loads of woman...your a Mock Star.
4.8 Genius!

4.9. Nevertheless, somebody clean this mess up. We have guests.
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Old 02-07-2007, 06:43 AM  
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Just made me think, there's room in the market P!ATD or My Chemical Romance cover of Oasis' "Rock'n'Roll Star". It could be retitled "Mock'n'Kohl Star".
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Old 02-09-2007, 09:54 PM  
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A tip for the ignorant who keep on using 'emo' as a criticism in these song writing threads, the term your looking for is 'romanticism', a movement which has spawned some of the greatest poets and writers in history. keats, wordsworth, blake, shelley, astille, poe, coleridge - yes, all your run of the mill emo poets.
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I think I'm related to Blake. I am related to Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, which, I think, is pretty awesome.
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This has been surprisingly helpfull, especially crowes advice but still after a year i don't think i'm ready to post anything up. (i still think i'd just be burdening you with poor writing skills)
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