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Old 07-24-2006, 03:20 PM  
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Default Reach Out - Hobojesus and DRMO collaboration.

http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/

VERSE

It's dangerous where we're at right now
Taking it in turns to start the rows
See I know you so well
Which makes it harder to leave

It's a scary place to be we know
At the end but not letting go
I've got your things
They'll be staying with me


VERSE

All of us huddled round the bar
the tables have gone and it's left a mark
Drown myself here
And you can't say anything

Leave me to die I say with a sigh
That’s all you’re getting, I’m not saying goodbye
Pour my emotions with the ***s and dregs
Down the sink....


CHORUS

Reach out
And touch me tonight
Not there
Yet but you'll be alright
Reach out
And touch me tonight
I’ll wait impatiently
For…
For…


VERSE

Plastic wrapping sugar coated
Think of a love song tonight I've wrote it
Glass in hand
Putting on a show

Freedom fighter, morning rewriter
Object of my desire
Come close
And I won't let you go

CHORUS

Reach out
And touch me tonight
Not there
Yet but you'll be alright
Reach out
And touch me tonight
I’ll wait impatiently
For…
For…
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When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:24 PM  
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http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/

VERSE

It's dangerous where we're at right now
Taking it in turns to start the rows
See I know you so well
Which makes it harder to leave


It's a scary place to be we know
At the end but not letting go

I've got your things
They'll be staying with me



favorite parts. nice song :]
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:25 PM  
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I'm going to repost the link, because you ARE going to listen to the collaboration songs and you WILL comment on them here.

http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:25 PM  
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I downloaded it, & i'll listen to when I don't have a bunch of people hovering around me. So expect somethin laterr!
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:26 PM  
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favorite parts. nice song :]
Thanks very much. I liked the rhythm on the 'at the end but not letting go rhythm', thought I'd managed to make it pretty funkaeee

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Play it to them Ethan!
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:32 PM  
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*plays it for them*

I don't think they're hot on it (they suck so it doesn't matter), but fuck I like it.
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:32 PM  
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http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/
How do I work this thing? ^
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:36 PM  
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1. Click on the link

http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/


2. Go 1/3 way down the page and click on the blue text which says

'Download for free with FileFactory Basic'

3. On the new page which then opens, scroll down a bit and click on the blue text which says:

'Click here to begin your download'

4. When the grey box appears saying 'Do you want to open or save this file' then click 'save' and save it wherever you like, as you would with any other file.

5. When the download finishes (I tried it to check it works and it took me 2 1/2 minutes) open it in your normal music playing program.

6. Enjoy.
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http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/
How do I work this thing? ^

good question.
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Old 07-24-2006, 03:38 PM  
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1. Click on the link

http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfe781/


2. Go 1/3 way down the page and click on the blue text which says

'Download for free with FileFactory Basic'

3. On the new page which then opens, scroll down a bit and click on the blue text which says:

'Click here to begin your download'

4. When the grey box appears saying 'Do you want to open or save this file' then click 'save' and save it wherever you like, as you would with any other file.

5. When the download finishes (I tried it to check it works and it took me 2 1/2 minutes) open it in your normal music playing program.

6. Enjoy.
Thanks...ha I nearly ended up getting a free phone with 6 months free line rental.
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