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Old 07-28-2006, 03:54 PM  
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sang with 2 vocalists

process of deprogress



in order to fit in this process
this process of deprogress
you must surrender your mind
and believe all of their lies
shut your eyes be led around
at thier mercy bowing down
live their rules speak their way
lose yourself and obey
as everyones played in this game
dont bother to read the names
it will all turn out the same
so much to lose with so little to gain
in order to live a good life
you must not argue, must not fight
live and do just as your told
only form to fit their mold
never ever speak yer mind
forget the answers you cant find
give up searching for the truth
never win always ****ing lose
as everyones played in this game
dont bother to read the names
it will all turn out the same
so much to lose with so little to gain
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Old 07-28-2006, 03:57 PM  
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"in order to fit in this process this process of deprogress" I like that bit the best, I think its very good. Do ya have it recorded?
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Old 07-28-2006, 04:17 PM  
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not yet, we have the music recorded, just waiting to plug in the vocals. originally it was supposed to be sang by me and a friend of ours Jen, who was going to be our singer before she moved to Colorado. Now, its going to be sang by me and our other guitarist Tim.

<----Jen, total sweetheart
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Old 07-28-2006, 04:31 PM  
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Old 07-28-2006, 05:09 PM  
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I'm beginning to wonder if there's any girl you won't do
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I liked how agressive the lyrics were. It sounds like a nice metal anthem, similar to lyrics Fear Factory would write.
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Old 08-03-2006, 09:17 AM  
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I really liked the lyrics as well

When are you gonna upload some stuff??
I'd love to hear some
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Old 08-04-2006, 09:11 AM  
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www.thedeclaimed.com has 1 song (my wandering mind), but this weekend i might try to upload some others, we recorded a bunch of better (IMO) songs last week but havent been able to get the recordings in my hands as of yet.
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Old 08-04-2006, 10:25 AM  
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I like...........................A LOT!!!

Old Skool, exactly my kind of thing
Keep em coming
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