Mistaken for Absence or the Reunion of Hearts (title, memory)

Crowe · 08-11-2006, 02:35 AM

Lil bitty love song. Enjoy.

Mistaken for Absence, or the Reunion of Hearts

I am rusty, so here, let's begin.
My lungs are trippingly touchy,
And softer than a silken sin.
My lips are moving, but like a,
Silent film my words are lost in,
A flickering light behind you.
The piano will play you a tune.
And therein you must decide my,
ebb and flow like the tide it's,
the only way to tell you how I feel.

I am trusting dear, let's reach in,
To each other's chest where,
Simplicity is merely a few beats,
Off from the measure you hear when,
I speak to you when I'm sleeping.
My lips are moving, but like a,
Noisy room, my words are lost in,
That screaming man behind you.
Instead my heartbeat will play you a tune.
And therein you must decide why,
The quicker the beat is how, well,
the only way to tell you how I feel.

I am causing fear, don't give in,
To the light in my eyes that,
May cause alarm, so I ask that you,
Stare through them and see my,
Thoughts that sometimes escape my,
Lips that are moving, but like a,
Memory, my words are lost in,
That foggy world where we forget.
Instead my gaze will play you a tune.
And wherein you must decide why,
The water welling up my eyes is,
the only way to tell you how I feel.

And after this brief reminder,
We fall in love again.

Trauma · 08-11-2006, 11:03 AM

That was awesome.

The rhythm in that poem was so flowing, it rolled off the tongue and brought the actions together in such a stylish way.

Crowe · 08-11-2006, 11:05 AM

Thx

- I also enjoy the Ace Ventura reference in your Custom Title :P

Trauma · 08-11-2006, 11:07 AM

You're welcome
Lolz, that's why I love that Fall of Troy song, I always think of that crazy cross-dresser.

**sleepy jack fire drill** · 08-11-2006, 03:49 PM

Aww, I loved it like, its amazing.

explosions-in-my-pants · 08-11-2006, 03:57 PM

Crowe, that might be one of the most beautiful things i've ever read.. its perfect. GRAET WORK!

Crowe · 08-12-2006, 05:38 PM

Thanks guys! Anything you particularly like, or something that could be altered to make it better?

explosions-in-my-pants · 08-12-2006, 05:41 PM

no its perfect hun.

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08-11-2006, 02:35 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 632	Mistaken for Absence or the Reunion of Hearts Lil bitty love song. Enjoy. Mistaken for Absence, or the Reunion of Hearts I am rusty, so here, let's begin. My lungs are trippingly touchy, And softer than a silken sin. My lips are moving, but like a, Silent film my words are lost in, A flickering light behind you. The piano will play you a tune. And therein you must decide my, ebb and flow like the tide it's, the only way to tell you how I feel. I am trusting dear, let's reach in, To each other's chest where, Simplicity is merely a few beats, Off from the measure you hear when, I speak to you when I'm sleeping. My lips are moving, but like a, Noisy room, my words are lost in, That screaming man behind you. Instead my heartbeat will play you a tune. And therein you must decide why, The quicker the beat is how, well, the only way to tell you how I feel. I am causing fear, don't give in, To the light in my eyes that, May cause alarm, so I ask that you, Stare through them and see my, Thoughts that sometimes escape my, Lips that are moving, but like a, Memory, my words are lost in, That foggy world where we forget. Instead my gaze will play you a tune. And wherein you must decide why, The water welling up my eyes is, the only way to tell you how I feel. And after this brief reminder, We fall in love again. __________________ Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

08-11-2006, 11:05 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 632	Thx - I also enjoy the Ace Ventura reference in your Custom Title :P __________________ Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

08-11-2006, 03:57 PM
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 937	Crowe, that might be one of the most beautiful things i've ever read.. its perfect. GRAET WORK!

08-12-2006, 05:38 PM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 632	Thanks guys! Anything you particularly like, or something that could be altered to make it better? __________________ Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

08-12-2006, 05:41 PM
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 937	no its perfect hun.