On The Edge And Falling

ZeppelinAir · 11-02-2006, 02:22 PM

i havent done one in awhile so here is one

On The Edge And Falling

Sit at home and wait for the call you never get,
Desperately alone and on the edge,
All the while thinking of the things you regret,
Just wanting to jump of that ledge,

Time and time again you forget,
About the ones who care if your alive or dead,
And you know that they never regret,
What they always said,

There you go last in line again,
And the last to be picked,
But you always know,
That you will always have the last laugh,

Time and time again you forget,
About the ones who care if your alive or dead,
And you know that they never regret,
What they always said,

Closer than ever before,
The ledge creeping in on you,
Last thoughts in your head of what they always said,
Before you fall off the edge…

Time and time again you forget,
About the ones who care if your alive or dead,
And you know that they never regret,
What they always said

Kyren Tsunami · 11-14-2006, 10:11 PM

quite well-written but i wonder if the chorus could be said more? a little short there.

ZeppelinAir · 11-15-2006, 02:27 PM

om i will lengthen it

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11-02-2006, 02:22 PM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 544	On The Edge And Falling i havent done one in awhile so here is one On The Edge And Falling Sit at home and wait for the call you never get, Desperately alone and on the edge, All the while thinking of the things you regret, Just wanting to jump of that ledge, Time and time again you forget, About the ones who care if your alive or dead, And you know that they never regret, What they always said, There you go last in line again, And the last to be picked, But you always know, That you will always have the last laugh, Time and time again you forget, About the ones who care if your alive or dead, And you know that they never regret, What they always said, Closer than ever before, The ledge creeping in on you, Last thoughts in your head of what they always said, Before you fall off the edge… Time and time again you forget, About the ones who care if your alive or dead, And you know that they never regret, What they always said __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things

11-14-2006, 10:11 PM
Kyren Tsunami Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 65	quite well-written but i wonder if the chorus could be said more? a little short there. __________________ all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future.

11-15-2006, 02:27 PM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 544	om i will lengthen it __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things