I Rape Donkies So I Decided To Dedicate A Poem To Them (lyrics, dancing)

TrampInaTux · 11-03-2006, 02:37 PM

second verse=brilliant. But cut out the last line about the winters kiss.

You are writing awfully self obsessed lyrics as of late, which I can kinda link to there being problems with you...

**sleepy jack** · 11-04-2006, 01:43 AM

Now that i've got your attention, me needs opinion on this poem I wrote for a friend cause me was a douchebag to her.

I Said Things Without Thought

As the leaves spin slowly on a dancing a wind and the sun hides its face behind a mask of clouds, with sorrow I view the passing days and see a red rose, wilting on what I thought would be our lovely walk.

The bright lights shine, and I watch the sky with a look of awe amazed at the wonder of it all, but it seems pointless and empty without you by my side, catching my kisses in the winters light.

As the leaves spin slowly on a dancing a wind, I asked for forgiveness my best friend, our friendship is a tale unfinished, so please angie forgive me.

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11-03-2006, 02:37 PM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,457	second verse=brilliant. But cut out the last line about the winters kiss. You are writing awfully self obsessed lyrics as of late, which I can kinda link to there being problems with you...

11-04-2006, 01:43 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,218	I Rape Donkies So I Decided To Dedicate A Poem To Them Now that i've got your attention, me needs opinion on this poem I wrote for a friend cause me was a douchebag to her. I Said Things Without Thought As the leaves spin slowly on a dancing a wind and the sun hides its face behind a mask of clouds, with sorrow I view the passing days and see a red rose, wilting on what I thought would be our lovely walk. The bright lights shine, and I watch the sky with a look of awe amazed at the wonder of it all, but it seems pointless and empty without you by my side, catching my kisses in the winters light. As the leaves spin slowly on a dancing a wind, I asked for forgiveness my best friend, our friendship is a tale unfinished, so please angie forgive me. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.