ZeppelinAir

i had nothing to do so i wrote this

Featherless Flight

Why cant I just get away,
Away from this place,
Away from the problems I face,
Just Fly away in featherless flight,
I wanna fly away,
And leave this place behind,
Wake up and fly away,
And never look back,

The wall closing in on me,
I just cant take this anymore,
So tell me why,
Why I cant fly away from this place,

I wanna fly away,
And leave this place behind,
Wake up and fly away,
And never look back,

These things wont go away,
These problems wont disappear,
So tell me what I did to you,
Tell me why hate me,
Hate me enough to drive me away

You wanna fly away from me
And leave me behind,
Wake up and push me away,
And you never look back

I wanna fly away,
And leave this place behind,
Wake up and fly away,
And never look back

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sleepy jack

Expand your vocabulary, the words are repetitive as hell and it makes it feel like im reading the same thing over and over.

I don't really like this, its kind of your typical teenage cliche hate my life sort of thing. "Featherless flight" sounds sort of cool, but it also sounds cheesy too.

Plus "I wanna fly away and leave this place behind" sounds like something thats already been done alot.

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Kyren Tsunami

I like the topic "Featherless Flight" quitemystical and spiritual though but your definitions for that topic is too repeatable, I've sworned that your record was broken.. O.o

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