Cinderella (hands, Hang)

TrampInaTux · 11-22-2006, 04:04 PM

There's a screw loose in my head and it's bothered me since birth
I've spent this long fighting hard to find out what I'm worth
and for every step I take, you knock me back another ten
So much time spent falling in it, I forgot what love meant
We painted a picture depicting us in many years time
in our mansion holding hands above the yobbos and the swines
I hope that the picture still remains if I ever need it again
To look back on and gaze into your eyes the downfall of many men

CHORUS
Oh Cinderella you make me kinda funny inside
The world is ours for the taking
Not giving up no no we are too good for that
Oh Cinderella there's a silence in the room
The night is ours to be painting
Red like the colour of our hearts and yes

I shall remain yours unchanged
What I gain defies the pain
I should be feeling by all accounts
You rip the dryness from out my mouth
My Cinderella she knows me well
I would never do that to you...

sleepy jack · 11-22-2006, 04:42 PM

yobbos?

This is good, I like the first verse the most.

I don't quiet get it in parts though, like I think you're talking to "cinderella" in the first/last verse right? Then you go "my cinderella she knows me well" in a different person viewing. I don't know i'm probaly missing something.

Crowe · 11-23-2006, 09:35 PM

I agree with Crowq. You go from talking to her and then referring to her in the same stanza. However, sometimes I refer to my girlfriend when she is right next to me playfully... maybe it is that? I like the word Yobbo, but what does it mean?

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11-22-2006, 04:04 PM
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,451	Cinderella There's a screw loose in my head and it's bothered me since birth I've spent this long fighting hard to find out what I'm worth and for every step I take, you knock me back another ten So much time spent falling in it, I forgot what love meant We painted a picture depicting us in many years time in our mansion holding hands above the yobbos and the swines I hope that the picture still remains if I ever need it again To look back on and gaze into your eyes the downfall of many men CHORUS Oh Cinderella you make me kinda funny inside The world is ours for the taking Not giving up no no we are too good for that Oh Cinderella there's a silence in the room The night is ours to be painting Red like the colour of our hearts and yes I shall remain yours unchanged What I gain defies the pain I should be feeling by all accounts You rip the dryness from out my mouth My Cinderella she knows me well I would never do that to you...

11-22-2006, 04:42 PM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,772	yobbos? This is good, I like the first verse the most. I don't quiet get it in parts though, like I think you're talking to "cinderella" in the first/last verse right? Then you go "my cinderella she knows me well" in a different person viewing. I don't know i'm probaly missing something. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

11-23-2006, 09:35 PM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 727	I agree with Crowq. You go from talking to her and then referring to her in the same stanza. However, sometimes I refer to my girlfriend when she is right next to me playfully... maybe it is that? I like the word Yobbo, but what does it mean? __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic