She Said Shes Giving Up (dancing, title, quote, songs)

**sleepy jack** · 11-22-2006, 03:55 PM

She Said Shes Giving Up

"i'm not half what i wish i was
i'm so angry i don't think it'll ever pass
and i was bad news for you just because
i never meant to hurt you"
- Elliott Smith

I swore i'd never write a love song again, well it looks like i'm swearing again.

I still imagine dancing under the summer sky with you, the grass beneath our feet, laughing to ourselves just us two forever, but forever is quickly running away.

These sounds kill me, I heard from a balance beam on the radio last night, like a cold knife dragging across my cheek, I feel the scarring and understand frailty of the human body.

Where did all those poems go promising forever? did they burn out like a star or just fade away with the night sky, so here I am, laying awake in bed again, laying awake and crying again, trying to forget the day that you left, trying to forget the days that we spent.

either/or · 11-22-2006, 05:04 PM

damn thats real sad. that also makes it good, if you get what i mean. also, nice smith qoute and nice use of sigur ros' untitled #1 code name under your name, above your avatar.

Crowe · 11-23-2006, 08:32 PM

In theory, you and your relationships are largely spent on fields at nighttime, I sometimes question what you do in the daylight, or if you have seen the daylight in the past 4 years.

:-P

_Spinning_ · 11-23-2006, 08:36 PM

Very nice, Ethan.

Pain+Suffering=Great Poems/Songs

**sleepy jack** · 11-25-2006, 03:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowe

In theory, you and your relationships are largely spent on fields at nighttime, I sometimes question what you do in the daylight, or if you have seen the daylight in the past 4 years.

:-P

<.<
I never realized, holy crap!

Crowe · 11-25-2006, 10:22 AM

hehehe

skindredluver · 12-03-2006, 12:20 PM

I think thats really good but why is it always about love?[are you really that love strucken?

**sleepy jack** · 12-03-2006, 03:29 PM

I write about what I deal with and lately thats been my now ex.

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11-22-2006, 03:55 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,572	She Said Shes Giving Up She Said Shes Giving Up "i'm not half what i wish i was i'm so angry i don't think it'll ever pass and i was bad news for you just because i never meant to hurt you" - Elliott Smith I swore i'd never write a love song again, well it looks like i'm swearing again. I still imagine dancing under the summer sky with you, the grass beneath our feet, laughing to ourselves just us two forever, but forever is quickly running away. These sounds kill me, I heard from a balance beam on the radio last night, like a cold knife dragging across my cheek, I feel the scarring and understand frailty of the human body. Where did all those poems go promising forever? did they burn out like a star or just fade away with the night sky, so here I am, laying awake in bed again, laying awake and crying again, trying to forget the day that you left, trying to forget the days that we spent. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

11-22-2006, 05:04 PM
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 379	damn thats real sad. that also makes it good, if you get what i mean. also, nice smith qoute and nice use of sigur ros' untitled #1 code name under your name, above your avatar. __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

11-23-2006, 08:32 PM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 726	In theory, you and your relationships are largely spent on fields at nighttime, I sometimes question what you do in the daylight, or if you have seen the daylight in the past 4 years. :-P __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

11-25-2006, 10:22 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 726	hehehe __________________ My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

12-03-2006, 12:20 PM
skindredluver Im Just As Sweet!!!:) Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: america Posts: 584	I think thats really good but why is it always about love?[are you really that love strucken?

12-03-2006, 03:29 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,572	I write about what I deal with and lately thats been my now ex. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.