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12-03-2006, 02:52 PM
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*** Junkie
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales
Posts: 80
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Sun Kissed
Sun kissed,
And smiling fine. She looks sweetly at me, And I gently melt, so slowly. As her finger-tips caress my fair neck, And trace sweet lines of ashen dew. I sigh out in whispers And take her hand. Sun kissed… |
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12-03-2006, 03:31 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,550
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OMG A NEW n00bs WHO WRITING DOESN'T SUCK =O
This is pretty, I like it.
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12-03-2006, 03:32 PM
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*** Junkie
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales
Posts: 80
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Lmao. I was waiting for you to say something. I've heard you can be very critical
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12-03-2006, 03:45 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
Posts: 5,516
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He likes it cos of your poetic/romantic turn of phrase.
In other words...you remind him of himself. |
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12-03-2006, 03:45 PM
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*** Junkie
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales
Posts: 80
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ahhhhh:P
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12-03-2006, 03:47 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,550
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Quote:
Shut up! My romantic poems deal with being in fields at night, ask Crowe.
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12-03-2006, 03:49 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
Posts: 5,516
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With stars twinkling in the night sky, reflecting your eyes like diamonds that cut my soul and scar my heart.
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12-03-2006, 03:51 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
Posts: 17,550
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Quote:
;D
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12-03-2006, 03:52 PM
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*** Junkie
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Loughor, Swansea, Wales
Posts: 80
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lmao
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12-03-2006, 07:57 PM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Chicago/St. Louie
Posts: 726
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If anything romantic happens in Crowquill's world - it must take place near a girl with nice curves, with a gentle moonlight, in or near a field... and someone has to cry. I love it.
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