Kyren Tsunami

I wonder if Raine is that serious to get marry with Crowe... -__-

despite of that, I like the creation, sound dispersing and sorrowful ^^

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all the songs I've Wrotes cames from experiences from the past, present and future.

jibber

She waits, she's naive,
That stupid knight has,
Yet to arrive on golden steed.
Will he ride to find her and if so,
Will he know the way home?

that line sticks out for me for some reason. i guess it just seems less mature than the rest of the song, but other than that, i really like it. like you said it's not your usual style, but you've done a great job with it, i'd actually like to see some more from you in the same style.

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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways

Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER

Alo

I like the lyrics, but while reading it, it had a P!ATD rhythm. But that's probably just me.

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I rocked my shoelaces untied

Crowe

Yeah you know what I actually had an interesting time deciding whether to keep that line. From the character of the naive girl, it fits. As for my own writing style, I'm usually much more descriptive. However, that verse is the thought of the character, and not my own thought. In her mind, she would be thinking - where is that stupid knight - and my songs are almost completely and utterly character driven... but you're right...

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My silly experimental band:

www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

Alo

^It's not really clear that it's her thought. It's more as if you're describing her, and then the knight, as a narrator.

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I rocked my shoelaces untied

jibber

^ yeah that's the impression i got from it, which is why it stood out for me

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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways

Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER

CityLightsLikeRain

silly emo lyrcs setion!

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Crowe

Ah, this isn't emo. Emo is now designated by over the top, personal reactions to situations and the sound of the actual music. This is more symbolic and a look at three very different people, a microcosm as it were. And instead of a personal reaction, it is told from the point of an omnipresent narrator. The point of the piece is to remind people that they are not alone, though situations may seem dire.

That being said, I also hate the label emo - every song ever written has an emotional attachment whether it's My Chemical Romance's "Helena", Led Zeppelin's "Stairway to Heaven", Chuck Berry's "Maybelline", David Bowie's "Queen Bitch", or even Andrew W.K.'s "Party Hard".

I think the term "emo" is a tool for hipsters to further alienate themselves from people they see as conformists or whatever the label is now. I find it unfortunate that I have to use that term on a daily basis to describe certain bands and only to recieve a look of disgust as soon as it leaves my mouth.

Sorry Rant. This is not emo. But I like emo, so even if it were - w00t w00t.

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My silly experimental band:

www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

jibber

1) don't post if your post is going to be useless
2) if you can't stop yourself from making useless posts, at least post in english. LYRICS not lyrcs (vowels are fun), and section, not setion.

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What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road.
William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways

Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass.

HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER

CityLightsLikeRain

what the feck are vwels. If you even paid a BIT of atteninn to me tpical posts youd know my skils are quite exceltn.....ssoberly. I have every right to post here mothafucer! down with the man! Who you? a mod? thinking not.

...and to Crowe, we all can admit thatthe entire lyrics secitn is pretty much an extensin of the emo fourm. It can get pretty bad. i'm not saing mcr is emo. But soe of this stuff is pretty dman emo. Crowquill is a good poet though, no metter the comtent.

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