So Far... (member, memory, song)

ZeppelinAir · 12-06-2006, 12:21 AM

i had to do somthing on this topic, recently there as kid who died in a crash, i didnt know them but alot of my friends did and it made me think, if it could happen to them it could happen to anyone, so this is a topic everyone can relate to, this is directed at no one in particular, anyone who has passed, but back on topic here it is..

So Far

Just flat lined and lost it all,
Its over now and your gone away,
Away from this place,
But your not gone, no never gone,
Cause everyone will remember….,

A better place awaits your there,
Everyone will find you now,
As they hope they see you again someday,
Everything you wanted awaits you there,
Forget the pain you knew,
And remember the ones who you will see again someday….,

Some just don’t seem to care that your gone,
They criticize your name and just don’t give a hell what they say,
But I know someday someone will say,
Who gives a **** about you…,

A better place awaits your there,
Everyone will find you now,
As they hope they see you again someday,
Everything you wanted awaits you there,
Forget the pain you knew,
And remember the ones who you will see again someday…..,

If I could trade anything to see you again,
I would never think about what to give,
All I want is to see you again…….

A better place awaits your there,
Everyone will find you now,
As they hope they see you again someday,
Everything you wanted awaits you there,
Forget the pain you knew,
And remember the ones who you will see again someday….

**sleepy jack** · 12-06-2006, 12:43 AM

Writing about this sort of subject is always possible, because its difficult to do it in a non-cliche manner. It seems like i've read this sort of song a million times, its not very good. Its just too ordinary.

Try talking about a memory about the kid, if you don't have one make one up make it more of a personal song, and about the actual kid as just opposed to him dying and the aftermath.

Crashing Sun · 12-07-2006, 09:00 AM

It's all second hand information. If you had known the dude personally then your reaction might be more genuine. We lost someone very near and dear to us recently but it's so personal to the point where I haven't been able to write anything about it yet... but give me time.

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12-06-2006, 12:21 AM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 544	So Far... i had to do somthing on this topic, recently there as kid who died in a crash, i didnt know them but alot of my friends did and it made me think, if it could happen to them it could happen to anyone, so this is a topic everyone can relate to, this is directed at no one in particular, anyone who has passed, but back on topic here it is.. So Far Just flat lined and lost it all, Its over now and your gone away, Away from this place, But your not gone, no never gone, Cause everyone will remember…., A better place awaits your there, Everyone will find you now, As they hope they see you again someday, Everything you wanted awaits you there, Forget the pain you knew, And remember the ones who you will see again someday…., Some just don’t seem to care that your gone, They criticize your name and just don’t give a hell what they say, But I know someday someone will say, Who gives a **** about you…, A better place awaits your there, Everyone will find you now, As they hope they see you again someday, Everything you wanted awaits you there, Forget the pain you knew, And remember the ones who you will see again someday….., If I could trade anything to see you again, I would never think about what to give, All I want is to see you again……. A better place awaits your there, Everyone will find you now, As they hope they see you again someday, Everything you wanted awaits you there, Forget the pain you knew, And remember the ones who you will see again someday…. __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things

12-06-2006, 12:43 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,552	Writing about this sort of subject is always possible, because its difficult to do it in a non-cliche manner. It seems like i've read this sort of song a million times, its not very good. Its just too ordinary. Try talking about a memory about the kid, if you don't have one make one up make it more of a personal song, and about the actual kid as just opposed to him dying and the aftermath. __________________ I'm not blind, I believe in you.

12-07-2006, 09:00 AM
Crashing Sun Idontthinkyouknow Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Out of the Frying Pan Posts: 103	It's all second hand information. If you had known the dude personally then your reaction might be more genuine. We lost someone very near and dear to us recently but it's so personal to the point where I haven't been able to write anything about it yet... but give me time. __________________ People Against People "Scientists in Taiwan say they have bred three pigs that glow in the dark." (Support Spam)