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Old 12-09-2006, 11:23 PM  
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I Guess It Was Just Me That Made This Bed, Time To Sleep.

I, in my weakness of heart and inability to get over you turned to a pair of open wings, but never loved her, no never she could have been any bird, but she was yours, those waiting wings were yours, and I don't know whats been said but our flower was sadly withered before it left the ground, and now I sit regretting in this catacomb I call a heart.

I never meant to hurt you, but I suppose it was nothing more then a different view of the same scene, you were gone, I was scared and she was there, a beautiful tree with a rot at the roots, but I have a question, where do the lies go when they're blown through the forest, and end up burning in the campfire? The leaves, they were nothing other then shit.

But from shit can come roses when it goes back to the ground I suppose things will "work themselves out in the end", but thats just a dream of my own, ever the optimist, but it times to forget the dreams of "love in the fields", because don't you know? Hurricanes can come whenever and ruin the earth.

And this is just the same scenery from a different view, and heres me and you, fighting again, just don't believe me, and I wonder where we go, when were blown like leaves to the road, and the weather freezes us alive, but the fire continues to burn inside.
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Old 12-10-2006, 09:18 AM  
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There seems to be some duality and a wee little bit of anger.

This reminded me of a famous Shakespeare solilioquy, by Friar lawrence from the play Romeo and Juliet. I don't know if that was intentional but it added a little more in depth thought to this.

I like it. . . . . . . . . .
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Old 12-10-2006, 10:19 AM  
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Its really good, but the part about"our flower was sadly withere before it left the ground" doesnt realy make much sense b/c flowers cant fly. Not sure if thats what you were going for or not. And does "I was scared and she was there" refer to cheating on a girl?
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Old 12-10-2006, 12:30 PM  
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Yes, because being broken hearted and some chick hitting on you is sooo cheating.

And withered as in, dying.
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Yes, because being broken hearted and some chick hitting on you is sooo cheating.

And withered as in, dying.
No need for the attitude man, just tryin to help out
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Sorry this whole situation has me pist.
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Sorry this whole situation has me pist.
get a dartboard, put a picture of her over it, and aim for the eye.
Works all the time
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Do you have any more recordings other than the stuff you put in the thread where you upped stuff? I'd like to hear some of it if you do.
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No, I need to get a microphone. I haven't really recorded anything in forever aside from my other bands hardcore/metal/grind stuff.
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Does that imply you have recording from your other bands? Link it up yo.
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