Poetry (dance, metal, title, talented, song)

Stu · 01-12-2007, 05:07 PM

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Originally Posted by PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

I actually think of myself as a good writer. Because I've been told by other writers. And after doing it for almost ten years...plus, it's all I want to be, so, I better be good, or I'm fucked.

post some stuff then?

Stu · 01-12-2007, 05:10 PM

my bad, you have, tis good.

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 01-12-2007, 10:30 PM

Little arrogant, DracRomin? Lol. More to come LedZepStu.

sleepy jack · 02-11-2007, 03:28 AM

didn't feel like making a thread, this is kind of cheesy i guess, itwas supposed to be way shorter...

I Know A Girl Who Can Deep Throat Half A Light Saber

And i'd sit on the sand and watch the sea catch fire, tracing your name in every grain, hoping in those letters I'd find you somewhere, and i'd send my kisses on the wind, hoping they'd touch your lips.

So I ran to you, following a stream tangled up with leaves, and I took a break by the roots and dreamt of you holding my earth in place, and though it seems you're as far as foreign seas, I run on, through mountain tops and all the grass inbetween, you're not really ever that far from me.

Knowing that weve been chained to this ground, Ever since the apple fell down has, Never left me feeling stranded because those, Days we spent have left me feeling, Reminiscent about all those words said, And love is such a beautiful rose when the garden is your heart.

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01-12-2007, 05:10 PM
Stu Music Addict Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: London, England Posts: 3,168	my bad, you have, tis good.

02-11-2007, 03:28 AM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,772	didn't feel like making a thread, this is kind of cheesy i guess, itwas supposed to be way shorter... I Know A Girl Who Can Deep Throat Half A Light Saber And i'd sit on the sand and watch the sea catch fire, tracing your name in every grain, hoping in those letters I'd find you somewhere, and i'd send my kisses on the wind, hoping they'd touch your lips. So I ran to you, following a stream tangled up with leaves, and I took a break by the roots and dreamt of you holding my earth in place, and though it seems you're as far as foreign seas, I run on, through mountain tops and all the grass inbetween, you're not really ever that far from me. Knowing that weve been chained to this ground, Ever since the apple fell down has, Never left me feeling stranded because those, Days we spent have left me feeling, Reminiscent about all those words said, And love is such a beautiful rose when the garden is your heart. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.