sleepy jack

Being in love fucking sucks, I really wish I wasn't such a stupid worthless shit.

When There's Nothing Left To Burn, You Must Set Yourself On Fire.

Treading on broken shards of glass, a love so fragile, to shatter slower then melting ice yet burn faster then dry grass.

These cuts have become so familiar, the glass, it just sets into the same scars with every familiar footstep, I could try and hide my sins and regrets, but it won't work its so obvious just from eyes and cries its so obvious, I will never be okay.

And so I write and write, till my ink is all dry, and I hope these words reach her, but I hope she doesn't understand what all these drug driven poems are about, I hope she sees the silhouette and never the profile.

I hope I can fall asleep without dreams, I hope I can fall asleep without my balance beam, I hope i'll die with the sunset.

Set on fire by the touch of the end,
Set on fire as the flames kiss my skin,
Set on fire, I will begin.

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I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier,
He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

swim

This is my least favorite out of everything I've read of yours. Maybe for the simple fact that it's not unique to itself. A lot of it's kind of generic but, above is what I think you should keep.

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PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Originally Posted by Crowquill
I really wish I wasn't such a stupid worthless shit. < Coincidentally, ME TOO! Hah, just kidding.

Swinintheundertow is right.

shatter slower then melting ice yet burn faster then dry grass.
^ I liked that though.

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I said: I'm fucking the Prime Minister Of Spain.

Crowe

I agree with this post. It's strikingly different than most of the other things you have written.

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