Stu

i know its cliche and over emotional, but it was written on an emotional subject.


The lights they shine outside / yet it’s in the dark we hide.
the beacons lit for sake of hope / were burnt out lonng ago
Yes the dark is our reprieve /as we struggle through the sinews of a mind besieged by ignorance / a maladaptive will to sin / a will devoid of discipline / a will deprived of pride

Well I’m sure, your nights, feel longer
And I know, those thoughts, still linger
But this rage inside, grows stronger
And to you I say is blood really thicker?

I understand your plight / yet I fail to sympathize / when there’s no hint of fight / no tug of war / the rope is worn and slack.
They say forgiveness is a strength / yet I’m unforgivably weak / yes you’re a victim of the circumstance / tricked into the devils dance / bludgeoned by a darkened past /
Yet pity’s something I can’t hide

Well I’m sure, your nights, feel longer
And I know, those thoughts, still linger
But this rage inside, grows stronger
And to you I say is blood really thicker?

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This is me.
http://www.myspace.com/limbodwelling

Good evening i unzipped my skin
thankfully unscrewed my head
exactly as i always do when i prepare myself for bed
and while i slept this co-co came as naked as could be
he put on the skin and screwed on the head
that once belonged to me

Crowe

This song is about your father, leaving your mother perhaps? or the family?

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Stu

very good, its about his alcoholism and the subsequent divorce, so you were pretty much bang on..

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This is me.
http://www.myspace.com/limbodwelling

Good evening i unzipped my skin
thankfully unscrewed my head
exactly as i always do when i prepare myself for bed
and while i slept this co-co came as naked as could be
he put on the skin and screwed on the head
that once belonged to me

Mr.Jack

great lyrics personal expierences make the best ideas for songs

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Back in the day i would drink with anyone just as long as they had somethin to drink-Mike Ness

matious

i can relate.

i thought the chorus was pretty good. I can write anything for ****, even a 3 paragraph paper...so this was amazing for me.

Trauma

I like it, the lyrics were quite good.
The only thing I would say needed some attention was the replacement of backslashes for phrases.

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