Hey Sky Eyes, Where Are You Now? (Kiss, show, memories)

**sleepy jack** · 01-27-2007, 04:04 AM

yeahthis about, missing someonealot. I wrote more verses to it but it was cliche, and rather toopersonalinparts.

Hey Sky Eyes, Where Are You Now?

There was this girl who use to wake with me,
I miss the feel of her skin against mine,
Its so suprising how everything reminds me of her,
The sun rise that would come through the curtains,
Shining through and i'd see your skin,
So pale, so perfect and amaze,
The warmth of its rays as you gently stir,
Always scared to show me your face,
But don't you know? you're most beautiful in the morning,
Without all make up, that big fake lie,
And those clean golden lights,
They'd warm your body as you'd touch mine,
And I look back on these memories so amazed
At how beautiful we were, you and me.

Your eyes how blue they always seem to be,
The sky seem to be a petty tribute,
And your beautiful smile,
It seemed to light the world a fire,
And from a simple kiss after the day was done,
To your nervous smile after we'd had our fun,
And I miss you despite the fact you wish
I never did exist, and I tried to pretend
You don't exist but thats so hard,
When everthing seems to hold a memory,
Of you and me.

Loser · 01-27-2007, 09:52 AM

That was awsome, nice work

skindredluver · 01-27-2007, 11:30 AM

seriously that was cool!

Blain · 01-27-2007, 08:51 PM

Only thing I didn't like about was using the word skin twice in the first part of the verse, it's not really bad but it can easily be changed.

**sleepy jack** · 01-27-2007, 08:51 PM

Changed to body

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01-27-2007, 04:04 AM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,373	Hey Sky Eyes, Where Are You Now? yeahthis about, missing someonealot. I wrote more verses to it but it was cliche, and rather toopersonalinparts. Hey Sky Eyes, Where Are You Now? There was this girl who use to wake with me, I miss the feel of her skin against mine, Its so suprising how everything reminds me of her, The sun rise that would come through the curtains, Shining through and i'd see your skin, So pale, so perfect and amaze, The warmth of its rays as you gently stir, Always scared to show me your face, But don't you know? you're most beautiful in the morning, Without all make up, that big fake lie, And those clean golden lights, They'd warm your body as you'd touch mine, And I look back on these memories so amazed At how beautiful we were, you and me. Your eyes how blue they always seem to be, The sky seem to be a petty tribute, And your beautiful smile, It seemed to light the world a fire, And from a simple kiss after the day was done, To your nervous smile after we'd had our fun, And I miss you despite the fact you wish I never did exist, and I tried to pretend You don't exist but thats so hard, When everthing seems to hold a memory, Of you and me. __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.

01-27-2007, 09:52 AM
Loser The Professor Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: New York City Posts: 1,138	That was awsome, nice work

01-27-2007, 11:30 AM
skindredluver Im Just As Sweet!!!:) Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: america Posts: 584	seriously that was cool! __________________ Let them live in the stillness and know the flame. They will loose all and give all.. Boys are like lava lamps: fun to look at but not so bright Coffee, chocolate and men, some things are just better rich

01-27-2007, 08:51 PM
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,030	Only thing I didn't like about was using the word skin twice in the first part of the verse, it's not really bad but it can easily be changed.

01-27-2007, 08:51 PM
sleepy jack Bone Machine Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Jesusland Posts: 17,373	Changed to body __________________ You're so evil and I'm so good, I'll make it up to you someday.