Wonderland Hell

ZeppelinAir · 01-29-2007, 05:27 PM

Wonderland Hell

The shining ground blinds my eyes
With the sun blocked by the mountain of ice
A beautiful prism masks the sky around me
Mesmerized from the lights of north
Not hearing the cries of the sky
Warning me of the doom to face
The doom of the white bear
The great white bear claims all in its wake
With teeth and claws of ice
It rips apart my eyes and freezes my face
This is last thing I will ever know
The blinding light from the endless snow

skindredluver · 01-29-2007, 05:41 PM

OmG that was so cool!It makes me wanna cry!jk

sleepy jack · 01-29-2007, 05:44 PM

You know, you've really improved from the earlier stuff you posted. This is pretty good.

ZeppelinAir · 01-30-2007, 12:40 PM

thanks, guess it helps when im completely focused

Alo · 01-30-2007, 12:54 PM

I agree with Ethan, my imagination went wild on this one. Nice job!

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01-29-2007, 05:27 PM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 545	Wonderland Hell Wonderland Hell The shining ground blinds my eyes With the sun blocked by the mountain of ice A beautiful prism masks the sky around me Mesmerized from the lights of north Not hearing the cries of the sky Warning me of the doom to face The doom of the white bear The great white bear claims all in its wake With teeth and claws of ice It rips apart my eyes and freezes my face This is last thing I will ever know The blinding light from the endless snow __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things

01-29-2007, 05:41 PM
skindredluver Im Just As Sweet!!!:) Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: america Posts: 584	OmG that was so cool!It makes me wanna cry!jk __________________ Let them live in the stillness and know the flame. They will loose all and give all.. Boys are like lava lamps: fun to look at but not so bright Coffee, chocolate and men, some things are just better rich

01-29-2007, 05:44 PM
sleepy jack dance music Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 17,772	You know, you've really improved from the earlier stuff you posted. This is pretty good. __________________ I dyed my hair in a motel void met the coroner at the Dreamgate Frontier, He took my hand said I'll help you boy if you really want to disappear.

01-30-2007, 12:40 PM
ZeppelinAir hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 545	thanks, guess it helps when im completely focused __________________ Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things

01-30-2007, 12:54 PM
Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718	I agree with Ethan, my imagination went wild on this one. Nice job! __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied