Through Love and Deaf (quote, artist, bands, hands)

Crowe · 02-08-2007, 02:47 AM

Love is always beautiful.

Through Love and Deaf

I love my wife dearly,
Though she can't hear what I say,
I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay.

I knew her before she knew me,
As I followed her down a street.
The darkness enveloped me,
I masked the sound of my feet.
She walked ahead bravely,
Not knowing, not seeming to care.
When I stepped on a bottle,
She didn't turn around in fright.
Because of this, I fell in love that night.
I called out to her to make sure,
That she could not hear my words.
I approached her tenderly,
And slipped my hand in hers.

I love my wife dearly,
Though she can't hear what I say,
I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay.

When we first were married,
And I'd come home late,
I'd crawl in bed behind her,
Whether she was asleep or awake,
I'd tell her what I'd done,
All the intricacies of my afflictions,
My passion is not a normal one,
Nothing as passive as art,
Yet I consider myself an artist,
Stopping another person's heart.
Whispering all the details,
Into the canals of her ear,
Knowing all the while, that she would never hear.

I love my wife dearly,
Though she can't hear what I say,
I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay.

One night I had come home,
My hands stained with red wine,
At least that's what I'd tell her,
If it caught her wandering eyes,
I crawled in bed behind her,
Rubbed my hand down her body,
And told her about the mess,
She responded with a sigh,
And I tried to get some sleep,
Tonight however was different,
I felt her body shift to me,
She leaned close to my ear,
"I love you too, my sweet."

I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay,
Because I know secrets they will stay.
I tell her all of my secrets,
And she loves me anyway.

R. Crowe

sleepy jack · 02-08-2007, 03:18 AM

Jeeez, I like it.
I don't really get the husbands secret, this could be a problem with my state of mind though.

Crowe · 02-08-2007, 03:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowquill

Jeeez, I like it.
I don't really get the husbands secret, this could be a problem with my state of mind though.

He kills folks.

sleepy jack · 02-08-2007, 03:27 AM

Ah, I kind of thought that with the red wine thing but I wasn't sure.

*is dumb*

Stu · 02-08-2007, 07:08 AM

very good.

Crowe · 02-10-2007, 05:03 AM

*bump*

Loser · 02-10-2007, 07:58 AM

Really good

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 02-10-2007, 08:29 AM

Make his secret a bit more clear, other than that, bravo, my man. Brafckingvo. Lol.

Trauma · 02-10-2007, 01:37 PM

Very interesting subject matter.
Again, I still don't think you need to use commas in those long stanzas.
This would make a good song.

I liked it a lot.

Crowe · 02-10-2007, 02:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Snickers

Very interesting subject matter.
Again, I still don't think you need to use commas in those long stanzas.
This would make a good song.

I liked it a lot.

Ah yeah commas are kind of axiomatic for me

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02-08-2007, 02:47 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 676	Through Love and Deaf Love is always beautiful. Through Love and Deaf I love my wife dearly, Though she can't hear what I say, I tell her all of my secrets, Because I know secrets they will stay. I knew her before she knew me, As I followed her down a street. The darkness enveloped me, I masked the sound of my feet. She walked ahead bravely, Not knowing, not seeming to care. When I stepped on a bottle, She didn't turn around in fright. Because of this, I fell in love that night. I called out to her to make sure, That she could not hear my words. I approached her tenderly, And slipped my hand in hers. I love my wife dearly, Though she can't hear what I say, I tell her all of my secrets, Because I know secrets they will stay. When we first were married, And I'd come home late, I'd crawl in bed behind her, Whether she was asleep or awake, I'd tell her what I'd done, All the intricacies of my afflictions, My passion is not a normal one, Nothing as passive as art, Yet I consider myself an artist, Stopping another person's heart. Whispering all the details, Into the canals of her ear, Knowing all the while, that she would never hear. I love my wife dearly, Though she can't hear what I say, I tell her all of my secrets, Because I know secrets they will stay. One night I had come home, My hands stained with red wine, At least that's what I'd tell her, If it caught her wandering eyes, I crawled in bed behind her, Rubbed my hand down her body, And told her about the mess, She responded with a sigh, And I tried to get some sleep, Tonight however was different, I felt her body shift to me, She leaned close to my ear, "I love you too, my sweet." I tell her all of my secrets, Because I know secrets they will stay, Because I know secrets they will stay. I tell her all of my secrets, And she loves me anyway. R. Crowe __________________ Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

02-08-2007, 07:08 AM
Stu Be like a squirrel Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: London, England Posts: 3,134	very good. __________________ This is me. http://www.myspace.com/limbodwelling Good evening i unzipped my skin thankfully unscrewed my head exactly as i always do when i prepare myself for bed and while i slept this co-co came as naked as could be he put on the skin and screwed on the head that once belonged to me

02-10-2007, 05:03 AM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 676	bump __________________ Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic

02-10-2007, 07:58 AM
Loser The Professor Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: New York City Posts: 1,141	Really good __________________ "It's just so fuckin' weird. You write about this shit, and you're suddenly the spokesman for a fuckin' generation,...... Any generation that would pick Kurt or me as its spokesman -- that must be a pretty fucked up generation, don't you think?"

02-10-2007, 08:29 AM
PaperHurricanesAndPlanes Bad motherfücker Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In The Realms of Poetry Posts: 518	Make his secret a bit more clear, other than that, bravo, my man. Brafckingvo. Lol. __________________ Say what again motherfucker, I double dare you, say what one mo' goddamned time!