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02-11-2007, 11:22 PM
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Short Poem.
Wrote this to cheer someone up would like opinions on ittt.
I Can See Your Face Down There In The Waves Can you hold the ocean in your palms? To let the salt trickling over your skin, Drawing lines of water so you can begin, To understand the joy in the waves, And learn how to dance in the oceans flow, To waltz with me, our feet on the sand below, Just one kiss and we'll live forever.
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02-11-2007, 11:24 PM
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Pepper Emergency!
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02-11-2007, 11:33 PM
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Are you hinting at something? =o
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02-11-2007, 11:34 PM
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02-11-2007, 11:36 PM
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I do I just thought you were implying I should change my hair.
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02-11-2007, 11:38 PM
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 I've never seen your hair.
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02-11-2007, 11:40 PM
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Still, =(! It doesn't need changing.
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02-11-2007, 11:42 PM
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02-11-2007, 11:45 PM
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<.< shh
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02-11-2007, 11:50 PM
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hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha
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nice i enjoyed it quite a bit, the first two lines seem to give a bit of depth
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