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02-15-2007, 02:55 PM
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Be like a squirrel
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: London, England
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Rendered Immobile
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Flummoxed with grief Discordant retentions of blasé belief Pious ramblings Bludgeoned till dead A nuance of grey coats the richest of red. Haughty delinquents Splattered in blame Seeds of denial cloud the towers of shame Banal resistance Fades once again The tumult subsides all efforts invain.
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This is me. http://www.myspace.com/limbodwelling Good evening i unzipped my skin thankfully unscrewed my head exactly as i always do when i prepare myself for bed and while i slept this co-co came as naked as could be he put on the skin and screwed on the head that once belonged to me |
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02-15-2007, 03:47 PM
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Bad motherfücker
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
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What the hell is this about? It seems way too pretentious, and it bores.
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02-15-2007, 04:13 PM
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Avin' It!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: THE PEOPLES ЯEPUBLIK ФF MAИCUИIA
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Try reading 3 lines at a time, then attempt to understand what Stu has gone to the trouble of posting. Baby steps, PaperHurricanesAndPlanes...baby steps. 
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02-15-2007, 04:50 PM
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hahahHAHAHahaha.......ha
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: somewhere in Michigan
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i like it, it has a dark feel to it and it flows pretty well. you should do more like this one
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Little Things "Sittin on a Toilet in a house i dont know, looking all around where the toilet paper go. feeling real uneasy, feeling real uncertain, got to wipe my ass again with a plastic shower curtain" Rodney Carrington-Little Things |
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02-15-2007, 04:56 PM
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Im Just As Sweet!!!:)
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: america
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I dont know what its about but I like the ryhming
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02-15-2007, 05:33 PM
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Be like a squirrel
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: London, England
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This is me. http://www.myspace.com/limbodwelling Good evening i unzipped my skin thankfully unscrewed my head exactly as i always do when i prepare myself for bed and while i slept this co-co came as naked as could be he put on the skin and screwed on the head that once belonged to me |
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02-15-2007, 05:46 PM
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Bad motherfücker
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In The Realms of Poetry
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Hey, I didn't quote my own poetry. That's a Bad Religion song. And "Compassion Through Heresy" was a motto before it was a title of one of my poems. How is "In the realms of poetry" pretentious?
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02-15-2007, 08:59 PM
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Location: Chicago/St. Louie
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Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic |
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02-15-2007, 09:00 PM
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Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic |
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02-15-2007, 10:22 PM
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Bone Machine
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Jesusland
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I second that disliking of flummoxed.
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